Tenten you dog

I liked it a lot. First stories are always difficult to write, but this was really good!

Short but good

hahaha...this is pretty good for your first!XD

Did she mistake my ‘hn’ for a yes? lol

i don't think it is suckish its great for a beginner

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IF YOU'RE SO GOOD NOW AS A BEGINNER HOW WILL YOU BE IF YOU DO THIS ALOT

that ending came came out of no were but i liked it cute (do they have pizza in Konoha let alone delivery for it? oh well doesn't matter i think its only fair they should if they have computors

Aweome job i loved the whole food and women thing. Im a girl 2 and im just like that. I think its the whole teenage thing that makes me insnaly hungry.

it's good for your first... a little like mine though mine are a bit random in plot? nice work

what do you mean it sucks? i think it's very good especially for a first one :D

Well that was smart of Tenten. And I have to agree wiht the "Never stand in the way of a woman… and her food" part. Cause 1. The "never stand in the way of a woman" part is 100% true! 2. Cause the "and her food" part is true too, cause we all gotta eat and if you stand in the way of woman and her food your standing in the way of woman. No that I have you confused, great story!

Sayonara,

Kat

Wow I really didnt think that Tenten could plan ahead that well... :/

Cute, like it a lot!

Funny! I like it mostly because I love the pairing. NejixTenten

-GaaraxxGirl

aw! how sweet! really short, but wicked gr8 for ur first fic! hope u write more! - ja ne!