Oh wow. :) That's so sweet of you.

And yes, that's better. Everything he said just completely made it feel like we could read his heart and his mind.

Anyway, the third chapter's not my cup of tea tho. More of NaruSaku. Tee-hee.

These are very enjoyable to read. Really, I'm happy with anything because of the way you write, but if you want a request, I'd like to see a NaruSaku. Also, I'm rather fond of GaaLee. /

That was short. :P But it was true.

UPDATE!