That was a very beautiful and insightful story for cassie and really fits her to a t very well done.

This story was astounding! It was so different than others I have read, and I loved how you depicted Cassandra. She's one of my favorite characters, and the past you gave her hear certainly seems to fit her mysteriousness. Well done with an original, creative plot line. I was pretty unsure as to how it would end, and I think that a story that makes you wonder is the best kind.

:D I know I'm a bit late with this, but I keep re-reading this story! I love it!

Amazing... This fic deserves more reviews! Fave!

omg i loved it good story

That has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. The story was absolutly increadible, the way you portrayed the characters was excellent too and the fluff was so cute!

The way you have done this story was really good in the sense that you're not really quite sure what to think about Cass, but in the end she was the most awesome character ever!

I thought the Misto and Jemi fluff was adorable too!

The story itself was very different from many other stories too, a lot more complex and unpredictable.

All in all, the story was one of the most awesome I have read and I really hope I see more of your work soon. ;D

OK, that was good.

...And now for a slightly more in-depth review... ;

The beginning was pretty like anything. And then I loved the dialogue, the natural conversations. At first I found the way Cassandra spoke a little annoying, but then I... got her more, I guess. By the end I was totally cheering for her.

I did find reading some of it a bit hard going, but I don't exactly know why. Maybe like Sleeping Tiger said? But I always wanted to keep reading, because the plot was always moving on somehow, giving away just a little at a time.

Great focus early on on Alonzo, Misto and Jem. Misto was just adorable. Tux. Saluting. Hehe. Jem was sweet and intriguing and non-annoying with it. Respect. Alonzo was just nicely real and complex- I definitely liked that his relationship with Cassandra wasn't just simple and straightforward.

Overall the plot was very original for CATS fic and, consequently, nicely unpredictable. I love how the meaning of the title finally came through. Also, *hearts* last line!

Can I make a small critique? When writing, sometimes you tend to use really long sentences, which is fine, but when they're followed by more really long sentences, they can get a little tedious and hard to read through. I had to read a few sentences over again, because it was a little confusing, and I don't think it was so much the sentence structure as slight exhaustion from so many long sentences. I know you probably know this already, but try changing up the legnth of sentences to give the readers' mind a break from sentence to sentence.

Aside from that, the plot is really developing! Poor Alonzo, he's so confused. And I love this dark motif you have going on, first with the shadows, now the rain, so even the days are dark. And Jemima's really starting to urk me, haha. Why won't she mind her own business? Anyways, good job, please continue _

It's too late at night to leave a competent review, so I'll just say. "Oh, the plot thickens" and it's nice to see Alonzo and Cassie together. _

I'm not a huge fan of Alonzo and Cassandra stories (even though I like the pairing), but I positively adore this one! I love how mysterious you make Cassandra and I also love the Misto/Jemima fluff. Please Update!

O.o I didn't realize you updated! Stupid story alert...anyways! Well, I liked the second part better than the first. The first part was so dark and confounding, as it was meant to be, but the second part seemed a little more involved with the characters. I don't know, I might not be making sense. Anyways, very interesting concept here. And things are really picking up!

Ooh, spookeh! It took me ages to work out that the monster was a dog *smacks head* Please update soon!

Very interesting. It's so different from the average Cats fics, and I like the Cats you've involved in the story. It's exciting, reading this fic, so far! Please continue _

Hmm. I have no idea what I think of your personification of Mistoffelees. He's so...side-kicky! Lol! Anyways, that aside, very interesting and vivid. The action seemed a little rushed at times, like the twins conveniently coming out of nowhere when it was needed, but I liked your dialogue and characterization - especially Alonzo. And it's definitely not your everyday fic! I love the supernatural, and I can't wait to read what happens. Please continue!

Ooh, things start to get more interesting. I like Alonzo's character - normally he's annoyingly cocky, but you've done a good job of making him believable in that he cares about Cassandra but he's still brave and all that stuff P Can't wait for the next chapter!