Reviews for Affairs of the Heart
Zucht chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
A nice warm fluffy story, I enjoyed it very much. Loved the Spiderman reference.
clois4life chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
that was beautiful

great story
gunnman chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
A sweet and wonderful fic. Perfect for the season.

Gunn
Georgia Kennedy chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
Another fine piece of work, Mark. You have definitely mastered the art of creating meaningful dialogue. And, you've got some really terrific lines in here, such as "Back the Love Boat up a minute here," and "we were like hot fudge and halibut, me being the halibut." The only change that I would make, and I guess this is a matter of personal preference is to the sentence involving the waiter: "Your meals shall be ready shortly," the waiter said kindly, "Would you like me to bring your wine to you now?” Other than that, it's a wonderful, tender, touching expression of love that fits the Valentine's day theme perfectly.
htbthomas chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
The moments between Chloe and Lois were so fun! They have this teasing relationship that is laced with real affection. And wouldn't we all just LOVE to see Clark and Lois say those three little words on the show! But the latest AlMiles interview just made me sigh... at least I know we can get our Clois elsewhere until then.
omgmyyouth chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
i loved it
CykePhoenixSummers chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
aww, that was such a sweet fic for vday. i liked it. Have a very nice Valentine's Day.
Jenn1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
Cute fic, Mark, sweet.