| Reviews for Affairs of the Heart |
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Zucht chapter 1 . 2/17/2007 A nice warm fluffy story, I enjoyed it very much. Loved the Spiderman reference. |
clois4life chapter 1 . 2/16/2007 that was beautiful great story |
gunnman chapter 1 . 2/16/2007 A sweet and wonderful fic. Perfect for the season. Gunn |
Georgia Kennedy chapter 1 . 2/15/2007 Another fine piece of work, Mark. You have definitely mastered the art of creating meaningful dialogue. And, you've got some really terrific lines in here, such as "Back the Love Boat up a minute here," and "we were like hot fudge and halibut, me being the halibut." The only change that I would make, and I guess this is a matter of personal preference is to the sentence involving the waiter: "Your meals shall be ready shortly," the waiter said kindly, "Would you like me to bring your wine to you now?” Other than that, it's a wonderful, tender, touching expression of love that fits the Valentine's day theme perfectly. |
htbthomas chapter 1 . 2/14/2007 The moments between Chloe and Lois were so fun! They have this teasing relationship that is laced with real affection. And wouldn't we all just LOVE to see Clark and Lois say those three little words on the show! But the latest AlMiles interview just made me sigh... at least I know we can get our Clois elsewhere until then. |
omgmyyouth chapter 1 . 2/14/2007 i loved it |
CykePhoenixSummers chapter 1 . 2/14/2007 aww, that was such a sweet fic for vday. i liked it. Have a very nice Valentine's Day. |
Jenn1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2007 Cute fic, Mark, sweet. |