| Reviews for A Most Important Element in Water |
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   CRoseSing chapter 1 . 5/20 Amazing story! This was a really unique adventure that created some darker aspects that would be necessary to win a war while still maintaining a delightful light and hopeful tone. I thoroughly enjoyed the round and dynamic characters, as well, and thought relationships evolved realistically and beautifully. Amazing job! |
| otteranddoe chapter 20 . 2/12 this fic has some really interesting plot points but alas I go no further. it is very very super slow burn and I've tried to stick it out but just cant. I'll check out some of your other work on my way out. |
| Guest chapter 29 . 8/25/2019 I loved parts one and two. Part three not so much, starting with chapter 24. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/24/2019 I'm a bit confused about when they look like themselves and when they look like someone else. Why run around looking like themselves at all, except around the cousin? Big risk. And Peter and Bella recognized him. Anyone could have. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/23/2019 Gee, let's waive the tiara around in public while discussing a Horcrux! Lol |
| zaubernuss chapter 6 . 6/10/2019 You have some really interesting ideas there... Voldi planning on turning the Tri-Wizard-Cup into a Horcrux (would explain why he went through so much trouble with the whole set-up instead of having Barty simply tie Harry up and drag him away)... Rovena's real tiara having been stolen from aunt Muriel years ago and having been replaced by a copy (is that actually canon?) ... and the description of how Voldemort marked Harry as his equal - making him an orphan, making him speak Parsleltongue, making him see Hogwarts as his home... I don't think this explanation for the line in the prophecy was ever given in the original books. I'm also pretty convinced that Voldemort intended to create a Horcrux by killing Harry that Halloween night. What might he have wanted to use? I suspect the invisibility coat, which (by chance?) wasn't at the house, but with DD, who had 'borrowed' it... |
| Zorak23 chapter 2 . 4/28/2019 Interesting take! I like it |
| Zorak23 chapter 1 . 4/28/2019 Oh, brilliant start! |
| Kushka chapter 29 . 4/30/2018 Fantastic story |
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 29 . 3/8/2018 the ending felt a bit abrupt, but it was an exciting story overall. |
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 19 . 3/7/2018 that's one way to do it lol |
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 19 . 3/7/2018 ahhh Minerva. I must say, you're a dab hand at foreshadowing! It's never too overtly done. |
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 12 . 3/6/2018 i was half right about price lol |
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 11 . 3/6/2018 the Underground is a clever touch |
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 8 . 3/6/2018 hmmm I have my suspicions about this Price guy. but I'll save them in case it's a spoiler. he seemed too triggered about the levicorpus |
