I really love your fanfic! Just discovered it in 2019 as I've been on maternity with my newborn. It made me laugh, it made me cry, it gave me goosebumps and kept me on the edge of my seat. The characters were very believable too. This is by far my favorite Dramione fanfic. I would totally read it again! I am sad that it's over now.

The plot was good, not damn good but pleasant and interesting. It could have been more realistic in some of the parts and lacked emotions. Draco and Hermione’s relationship as a couple was the best depicted part of the story, like both of them has the upper hand in their relationship, though Hermione was quite dominating in some of the chapters. Her Character was so out of place and really didn’t go with her personality. I liked how Draco’s character developed and stayed consistent, though it was bit unrealistic. Overall, it was a cute and fluffy story that I liked and would definitely read again, sometime.

I like how the story developing in the beginning, especially how Hermione and Draco met in venice. However as the story goes, i am a little disappointed in the way you developed Hermione's character. It's just like you described her as some immature teenage girl who can't control her emotions. But overall i like how you described other characters very well. It's a nice story.

okay, I have several problems with this. haven't finished reading yet but so far in the story, why do none of these characters use more magic than they do? there's no mention of Harry's Marauders Map, Hermione can easily cast a Disillusionment Charm to hide her belly. little things like that can be taken care of by magic. also kinda put off by how out of character Hermione is but I guess it's not really that big of a deal since this isn't Rowling's story. still would've liked to see more magic being used. overall, not a bad story. P.S. I really hate Allessandro. Hermione didn't have to mention he was her boyfriend, but could've said it was some random wizard she had a one nigh stand with so she wouldn't get into such a huge mess. Allessandro wouldn't exist therefore couldn't inform Lucius. eh idk. nice story though.

PREGNANT? PREGNANT HERMIONE?
WHAT HAPPENED TO USING A CONTRACEPTIVE CHARM?
The Howler from Mrs. Granger

I really enjoyed this story! It was so sweet. I love the dynamic you made between H & D. Thank you for such a fun read!

"Hermione said to tell you she dropped her water." that's hilarious perfection.

I love this so much. The teenage love/drama is on point. I keep getting butterflies as I read this.

My heart's racing for the past few chapters. I can't wait to read the rest.

Such a lovely chapter.

Wow that kiss.

Such a well written sweet story.

Haha. Love it.

I’m really liking the story and the plot , you write very well and it’s fluid. I just can’t stand this Hermione, she passes like a stupid, selfish and immature girl. It’s like she doesn’t understand what is really happening. She would rather risk the life of her husband and newborn baby just to get her N.E.W.T.S..

Awe love it