This story sucks because of one thing that you've done to yourself.
Namikaze has a contract with Hi no Kuni that allows them to leave whenever if they feel like it, and no one is allowed to stop them. Naruto should've been given knowledge of that contract either via the kyuubi, the seal on his growth, or the scroll. Now that you've gone and completely shat all over Chekov's gun, I'm forced to tell you that you've fucked up and that I will not continue reading this drivel until it has been revised, upon which I can give a truthful review on my feelings on your story so far.
Goodbye.

Nope. This is absolute utter crap. I hate that I wasted time with this

Wait wait wait, this was going great until I got here *not even halfway into the chapter* what is this crap about Naruto giving Hinata all that nonsense about believing in oneself and going on and on like some old man? I feel like this is one of those instances where good authors quickly run of ideas and then start making up nonsense.

that was good keep the chapters coming

i cant wait to see the next chapter

This is getting old. Where the hell is the originality?

update soon i like your story

... really the whole arrogant routine really?

disclaimer: I am not flaming I am trying to give you constructive criticism: Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one. The purpose of 'constructive criticism is to improve the outcome. I have no rights to this story and all affiliated parts and I only clam the stuff I add or subtract from it (to help keep lawyers off my back)
Review:
The story character interaction I highly dislike. Just a lot of Q&A parts, that sound like the people are just being either obvious to a fault, or sarcastic to a fault. (Which just make it not, haha silly, ((but urge I cant seem to want to continue to read this, but trying to because it would be a shame to not find out what happens next(silly))). Witch for me is not a story I would go back to often, like I would only check on it like once a year to see if it were updated or fixed and or patched (2.0/ 3.5/ 7.9 exedra)

that was good keep the chapters coming

Just came back to re-read the whole thing again, soooo super waiting for your next update! ]

Love your fic! Cant wait for more!

looking forward to see the next chapter

wow. much angst, bad write...

A very good story shame

Faved and Followed in hopes of new updates!

Walls of text and full of cliches, yeah is a story I can't read or recomend