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You speak like your about to become a parent XD Anyway another great job on a chapter well done Kit. I look forward to seeing more of it next year. At least of this fic.

Aww they had a baby X3 Kawaii I think that's Japanese for cute.

Okay, amazing as usual, but only one thing, unless a lot more time then a few months have passed, wasn't their child a female in the Christmas story?

Just saying.

Otherwise, still epic. Keep writing : D

Peace,

- Emile

0.0 How many kids are they having?

He said 'children' so I'm guessing twins right? Lol so cute how they just talk to each other while they're asleep makes me happy :)

Very well written and sweet. A pleasure to read.

I had a feeling this was kind of a song/thought fic but its pretty good and its abit weird that carm's father was part maned wolf xD funny really but I won't say nothing or maybe I just read that wrong anyway keep up the good work my friend you never disappoint me.

I had a feeling Carmelita was awake while Sly said all that. The only thing left to say is...

Y U NO UPDATE ON FOREVER ALONE DAY?

Ha ha. Kidding. Hope that you had fun with Dawn!

Kit I have always enjoyed reading your writings and i must say even though i am quite late I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope I can see another one next year!

p.s! SLY 4 coming in 2012! (Finally! ] )

i loved reading your seasonal stories and this final episode did not disappoint D

awesome finish here congrats!

It was well-written, and enjoyable. But I've got some criticism but pay it no mind if your opinion is different. I've enjoyed all your seasonal shots for a while now, and must say this isn't your best work. It just seemed kind of bot like something the two would do. I'm not a goodie-goodie or anything, but it just seemed a bit perverted in places (especially the end, which was a little unnecessary. It almost seemed borderline PWP, except that it was written extremely well, and characterization was good.

Idk- nice, but just a bit too much on the sexual references for a fluffy valentines series.

Oh wait, it's already on my favorites list...

Well! This is another superbly written story, filled with fluff, just how I like it sometimes. Racy indeed.

-Delta-

My feelings for you can be summed up in this pre-made four dollar card I found at the convenience store.

Happy Valentines day!

Glad you updated today. Been followin your story since the first chapter, though I'll be sad to see you go. Good work

Huzzah~Another great chapter. This satisfies my lust for the last chapter of Dawn of Progeny xD Happy Valentine's Day~