I loved how you worked around the word 'trick' to create this quietly lovely piece. The last paragraph is especially moving. Good job.

wow shunsui's a genius

Aww! That was surprisingly cute. I love your section of Shunsui. You did the first section, Nanao, well, but Shunsui is the one with the personality easier to play with. You've made him turn out to be very sweet and loving, and . . . well . . . good work :) very good work _