Reviews for Smile
Guest chapter 20 . 11/27/2014
Ordinarily, I'm a Dramione shipper, so I rarely like stories where they don't end up together, but this story just amuses me. It's probably one of the few stories (if there are any others) where there's a bet, and they don't end up together. I also like that she stayed with Ron, even if he did seem a little too understanding.
4thkage chapter 19 . 10/15/2014
oh my goodness...
why why why!
poor dracie...

nice story...
but i love happy ending...
it's really hurt when someone play with your feelings...
Fifitheflowertot chapter 20 . 3/31/2013
Really unique and amazing story. It was actually refreshing to have a sad ending - in terms of Dramione stories. Really enjoyed it
Kas Black Potter Winchester chapter 20 . 2/26/2013
i adored the story... yea part of me wished they got together in the end but i also enjoyed reading draco gettin what he gave out... paybacks a bitch... revenge is a meal best served cold and all that stuff lol again loved the story and look forward to more stories
lemonsimeanfluff chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
Wow... I have never read a story with such sadistic romance... Oh my gosh, even the title goes along with the sadism. XD It's interesting to see Hermione being such a BIATCH instead of her being the same innocent girl in many fics. Poor Draco though.. It pained me when he cried for her... FOR FUCKING HER. But, I understand how they weren't going to ever end up together. You kept explaining that throughout the story lol. But I enjoyed this anyways! Great job and thanks for the read! :)
emochappy chapter 20 . 4/15/2012
how wonderful the ending made me tear up a little bit but it was wonderful such a amazing story. i love it even though it was sad it was a good story to read.
InfantThaddeus chapter 20 . 11/27/2011
Congrats! I loved this! Such a funny history, very well-written, and full of all this feminine power that we can't do in real life - well, at least I can't... Im such a butter!

What I also liked is that the history was faithfull with the song Smile.

Ron was the cutest! And, to be totally honest, Ginny scared me more than Hermione.

At least, sorry for the bad english - it isn't my main language.

Keep writting! Congrats once again
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Excellent fic but it made me cry :(
PhantomM chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I remember I read this after going through so many one shots deploiting hermione as a pathetic little girl pining over Malfoys irresistible charm and I'd felt infuriated, wanting just one story that would have him being taken down a peg or two, it felt so satisfying to finish this. I admire the original books so much and how the characters are portayed that I wouldn't want any dramione's or erotic scenes to ruin that but fan fiction is always a nice way to read the odd interesting story and I enjoyed this :)
Sjora chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
I think people like Draco Malfoy doesn't deserve that. Even if he was so cruel to Hermione. Draco was verbal abuse and was taught wrong way and after everything happening to him. He deserve happiness after everything. Or better way to saying that, Everyone deserve happiness no matter what. That's my opinion.

Other than that. This is good story. It's funny and I've enjoy your story. But I think all good stories deserve happy ending. It keeping me relax. It just give me upset stomach. Don't get it too personal. I just being straightforward.

Otherwise, I enjoy this very much. Thank you for share.
Poor him chapter 20 . 11/29/2010
I read the whole thing and the endingade me cry. I'm a total Draco fan and to read of him being crushed so mercelessly just broke my heart! On top of that I know how the poor guy feels. My ex was only dateing me for a bet and some sex. Poor Draco!
Gatalicious chapter 20 . 3/12/2010
Well I personally loved your ending. I particularly despise those idiots who want to get all sentimental and want the world to end in rainbows and ponies. Draco was a complete and utter prick, he deserved what he got and good on you for sticking with reality in this case. Just because he's a bad boy, doesn't mean he is automatically deserving of redemption. As much as I hate Ron in general, even he doesn't deserve feeling rejected for just purely loving Hermione and Hermione is sly and wily and she can be remorseless if she tries hard enough. I think you did well witht he ending all things considered, good on you!
sokolski chapter 19 . 2/21/2010
Wow, excellent story. Hermione made it to the end. ;)
haiylighGIRL chapter 19 . 10/11/2009
U SHOULD MAKE A SEQUAL ABOUT DRACO AND HERMONE DO WIND UP TOGETHER PLEASE!AND IN LUV NO RON/HERMONE ONLY DRACO/HERMIONE PLEASE!
kawaiisenshi33 chapter 20 . 7/11/2009
Creative story. It had a weird ending but was surprisingly enjoyable... I couldn't see Hermione just falling for him last chappie either...I think how she left him was a little harsh but he was terrible to her for most of her school career. Good story and keep writing. Ignore all those illiterate people who don't read the warnings! _ Nice work!
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