"Venat says, Hark, and Cid does not obey."

Is this Cid's nightmare, or Venat's?

I don't have any words to describe this. Intense, like some of the others say, I believe ..

Although you only give us a glimpse of the dreams of a character, it's enough to fully grasp their personality and feelings.

You truly are a genius with words C:

And not to mention that Basch's part wast in fact the most scary of them all ..

Eek! Vayne's was... deeply disturbing.

Nicely set up, with the very short vignettes.

poetic. like all of your work. damn you damn you for being so good!

lol at Basch (sleeping sounding)

Good christ! Some of these made me sit straight up. We're offered just a tiny glimpse into each character's mind, just enough to come off with such powerful emotion.

Sheesh. Now I want to use this premise for like, every fandom. Would you mind? Just looking at this thing tells me how much fun it must have been to write.

...Hmm. Why is Basch's the most chilling of all, for me?

The ones on Vayne and Vossler really caught my attention. It's like you've got the heart of these characters laid bare. Skillful.

Wow, you take such a simple premise and turn it into something truly amazing. Each of these snippets, they're all so powerful. I can't begin to explain how perfectly you've captured these characters in such a small amount of space. Especially Basch's. And Vayne's. The no-headed nodding... just, wow!

Most authors are lucky if they can write one, two characters convincingly. I feel as if you could take your pick and whip up something astounding.

One thing: in Larsa's you've written "until first statue". I'm not sure but should it read "until the first statue"?

Anway, I'm definitely gonna check out more of your work,

~Aqua~

D: omg, congratulations, I love you in a non-sexual way. This here... in fact all of your stories are pure writing gold.

I love Larsa's... that gave me the creepiest imagery of all. Vayne and Halim's were great as well.

Yeah, can I say it sparked my imagination- now I want to write something like this for the Thirteenth Order. :3 Thank you for breaking writer's block.

You, madam, are a genius. It's because of people like you that I slog through literary sewage that composes 99% of the Pit's server space.

Wow, you can feel the enrgy and the life pulsating within these words. The structure was simple and easy to follow. Picturing this was too easy but I could almost taste the metallic blood, I could actually spit out the saltiness of it. It's details like that in vignettes like this that really suck in readers. It's writers like you with a reputation for really showing strong characterization in simple nightmarish dreams, that really get people inspired. This is by far one of your best works.

Keep it up, Mithrigil, keep it up.

Wow! Short but very intense.

Awesome.

Whoa. I really like this. Intense, but powerful. Especially enjoyed Vayne's... really great work.