This was the missing moment of why/how Bella became a ghost. Then the beginning of trying to hold herself together. when she did feel again. Very well written. I felt what she was going through.

Oh, poor Bella. You wrote her grief and pain well. She always felt that she loved Edward more than he did her. Thanks for writing missing moments from New Moon.

I love this kind of canon fic! Perfectly done, it seemedvery true to life for how her feelings would have been. I love getting the "missing pieces" great job!

You capture the mood perfectly, and then project it onto the reader. Excellent one-shot!

Oh, wow. This is one of the best angst pieces I've ever read for Twilight. It's just so... depressing. I've seen this scene - or one like it - many, many times, and this is by far the best rendition. Great job.

This was incredible :)

You are BY FAR the best author I've encountered on this site and I really agree with vanillfrappe, (about the Edward coming back thing).

I've seen lots of other fans try to write some sort of scenario like this but I think you would do it very well, you just so good and expressive. Whatever you plan to write, I'll read it :)

You are an amazing author

This is so... POWERFUL

& You've got the emotions just right - ana amazing peice of literature in itself let alone as a FanFic.

That was profound. I very different way of looking at bella's thoughts on not leaving Forks.

Good job. :)

that was really spot-on.. :)

You did her justice, her feelings...

This story made me depressed and sympathetic and made my heart ache, throb...just like hers...

That is the signs of amazing writers, they can evoke feelings and reactions out of their audience like they do. Good job.

omg so sad! But so perfect!

You know what? If you don't mind, let me express a wish. You know how Edward tells her he was just about to give up in 6 months and come begging for her to take him back in the 2nd book? If she had never jumped, and Alice had never seen her do so, he would have eventually come back. I don't know what you think, but I think you'd be perfect for writing this type of scenario. Your persepective of the story Twilight and the characters is really masterful. I think you'd do the job justice!

wow wonderful!

george

WOW! WOW! Amazing!

JENNIFER

that was well written, but it kinda made me depressed...