Reviews for Moving On
fierynightangel chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
cool! enjoyed it very much!
Sabi2 chapter 3 . 11/8/2008
Hehe, nice crossover :)

I would have enjoyed having Brian go on a few more missions, but you still did a nice job with it.

Sabi2~
cosmicfalcon chapter 3 . 5/5/2007
(grins evily)puddle jumper racing?
SexiBitet chapter 3 . 4/1/2007
When i first heard of this i wasnt to sure if it was goign to be any good, but boy im i glad i read this story.

It was one of the most thoughtful and creative stories that i have read in a while.

I liek how you brought in the fasst and the furious, and your portryaed everyone brilliantly.

At first i thought you would have but him with talya, but him and weir make such a bril couple, cant wait to see if you make a sequeal cause it would be cool to read
Devin Shay chapter 3 . 3/3/2007
This was really good! I love Stargate Atlantis and I was thinking of doing a TFATF/SGA fanfic, too! I would love to read about Sheppard and Brian racing puddlejumpers as well! That would be the perfect race! I think when you're not busy, you should write up some more because this story was just awesome!
Unyana chapter 3 . 3/1/2007
Aw, that was a nice story. Thank you, it was cute to read :-)
TnTornado chapter 3 . 2/28/2007
great story, but way to short! I'd love to read an epic with these characters, still, would be great to find out Dom and the gangs reaction to where Brian has been, and all that stuff.

Great job though,

TnTornado
Khajit chapter 3 . 2/28/2007
congrats! you finished it, I know from personal experience how hard it is to do that, so nice work.

ah, poor brian really got it good this chapter, stalking elizabeth and all. But it was fun reading how he thought he was crazy himself, and we all KNOW he sucks at going slow. He just keeps diggin the wrong chicks.'tis like roman said it.

I would really like an epilogue, but I'm the reader not the write so you should do what you like.

and they really should've bombed the natives like ronon, john and brian suggested ;-)
Calendar chapter 3 . 2/27/2007
Hm, I liked this fic a lot. I've never seen The Fast and the Furious, but Brian's character came across very well. You did the romance a little fast, but it was good. I'd have liked to see a bit more of Brian and Atlantis, especially since there was a lot of exposition just for them to get together and the fic to end, but then again, I ALWAYS want to see a bit more of good fics. I hate when they end!

I'm gonna keep my fingers crossed for that epilogue.
TnTornado chapter 2 . 2/23/2007
Hope you continue this - I'd LOVE to read more ... ALOT more!

TnTornado
Khajit chapter 2 . 2/15/2007
:-) aw male bonding, very cute. Once again I really liked this chapter, You know how to write down brian's thoughts it actually sounds like brian. With the more than occasional shit and the laid back additude. The best parts in this chapter were the one on mckay and the asgard. It did go really fast, it was like one moment he's on earth thinking about dom and mia and stuff and the next he's learning how to fly on atlantis, but maybe you did that on purpose to make things go as fast for brian as well as the reader. either way, another very good chapter.

I'm sorry it took me a while to review, I've not been feeling well for the past couple of days, and if there's another chapter coming up it may take a while for me to respond. Since I'm going on vacation for a week.
Khajit chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
I dig this story, It's refreshing, original and well written. Even though the start was a bit hard to read, It went better along the way. I hope you'll write another chapter soon