Reviews for A Forbidden Fruit |
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![]() ![]() Is this discontinued :'( ? |
![]() ![]() I don't know if you've given up on this story, but I come and read it again every other month or so to check if you've updated it. It's amazing. Seriously. I sincerely hope you'll continue it! ) |
![]() ![]() Please please please update this story! I absolutely adore it and your characterisations of Draco and Hermione are amazing! |
![]() ![]() And I, definitely like that! :) Perfect grammar if I do say so myself, and nice plot. OOC-ness is minimal, I suppose for your story with the whole back story and stuff.Q: Do wizards believe in the Greek gods? If so Hades is used correctly, if not, then it's not used correctly. Q: How exactly does that apple trick work? The details are vague and I like superstitions. ;D Please Update, A |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is sexy ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is simply exquisite! Keep posting and keep up the excellent work! |
![]() ![]() This chapter was awesome and so made up for the long wait. I am so happy. Thank you for writing it. I can only offer praise, because really that is what everyone wants. Very darling. Aren't Draco's eyes grey though? Not blue...but Tom's are. So I presume you're using his eye colour? Anyways, continue! I was so happy to find that the story was updated. Thank you for coming up with this spectacular idea. Again, much Love. I love everyone who writes for Draco and Hermione! Well, not everyone. So you are among a chosen few. Because you are good writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's the catch...I can't visit AFF at work. I have two little guys at home that demand my attentions so I will be struggling to get over ther to read on. I have sat here today and read all three of your stories...not getting ANY work done and now I am suffering with the knowledge that who knows when I will get to read more. Not Fair...(stamping feet here for effect). Ruth |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. Absolutely brilliant dialogue and characterizations. Well thought out and in depth. Draco has seriously done some growing up, but still has that roguish charm that made him so appealing to begin with. I do hope there's more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You horrible tease! Please update soon. I love their interactions; the banter is priceless. I'm loving this. By the way, I voted for you in every category you were nominated in for the Dramione awards. Good luck! You're an amazing author and deserve the props! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! great start to the story! I love all the small things you insert into the story (flying fish-briliant!). update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't I read this over at ThreeKeys? Have you gone further with it? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good job, 1lorett. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! please update soon. i love it so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love your story so far can't wait to read more please update soon |