Reviews for A Forbidden Fruit
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Is this discontinued :'( ?
Sandra chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
I don't know if you've given up on this story, but I come and read it again every other month or so to check if you've updated it. It's amazing. Seriously. I sincerely hope you'll continue it! )
Guest chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Please please please update this story! I absolutely adore it and your characterisations of Draco and Hermione are amazing!
Author D P chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
And I, definitely like that! :) Perfect grammar if I do say so myself, and nice plot. OOC-ness is minimal, I suppose for your story with the whole back story and stuff.Q: Do wizards believe in the Greek gods? If so Hades is used correctly, if not, then it's not used correctly. Q: How exactly does that apple trick work? The details are vague and I like superstitions. ;D

Please Update,

A
MONST3R chapter 3 . 8/22/2009
this story is sexy ;D
frostywatermelon chapter 3 . 4/29/2008
This story is simply exquisite!

Keep posting and keep up the excellent work!
Arie chapter 3 . 12/9/2007
This chapter was awesome and so made up for the long wait. I am so happy. Thank you for writing it. I can only offer praise, because really that is what everyone wants. Very darling. Aren't Draco's eyes grey though? Not blue...but Tom's are. So I presume you're using his eye colour? Anyways, continue! I was so happy to find that the story was updated. Thank you for coming up with this spectacular idea. Again, much Love. I love everyone who writes for Draco and Hermione! Well, not everyone. So you are among a chosen few. Because you are good writer.
claymor chapter 3 . 11/19/2007
Here's the catch...I can't visit AFF at work. I have two little guys at home that demand my attentions so I will be struggling to get over ther to read on. I have sat here today and read all three of your stories...not getting ANY work done and now I am suffering with the knowledge that who knows when I will get to read more. Not Fair...(stamping feet here for effect).

Ruth
Fanatic482 chapter 3 . 11/17/2007
I love this. Absolutely brilliant dialogue and characterizations.

Well thought out and in depth. Draco has seriously done some growing up, but still has that roguish charm that made him so appealing to begin with. I do hope there's more!
la-rubinita chapter 3 . 11/15/2007
You horrible tease! Please update soon. I love their interactions; the banter is priceless. I'm loving this. By the way, I voted for you in every category you were nominated in for the Dramione awards. Good luck! You're an amazing author and deserve the props!
Akira M chapter 3 . 11/13/2007
wow!

great start to the story! I love all the small things you insert into the story (flying fish-briliant!). update soon!
kazfeist chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
Didn't I read this over at ThreeKeys? Have you gone further with it? :D
Nina225 chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good job, 1lorett.
Queen Nightingale chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
great story! please update soon. i love it so much!
PoppyEmma chapter 3 . 11/12/2007
love your story so far can't wait to read more

please update soon
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