Oh fun view here with remus seeing some of that compatibility and spark!

Really sympathetic great look here at our interloper who can't help but cling to the lost girl!

can't wait for more

Ahh how ironic that it’s Wormtail responsible for bringing Lily and James together as well as Wormtail responsible for bringing about their deaths. Really interesting perspective, thank you!

I really really really loved this story! It was written in an interesting why with different POVs and the ending was also quite unique in a way. But my favorite thing about it was how you could feel, even with other POVs, just how much Lily and James felt for each other and how their inability to act (pun intended ;)) was so teeth-grittingly frustrating that they wanted to scream or break things or just fight and hurt each other because they FELT so much and there was nothing they could do about it! And how this only kept growing and they only got more miserable, with more misunderstandings, more fights and more reddened eyes and GAH! The angst was fabulous!

Poor Remus 3

Such wonderful teenage drama, precisely what the doctor prescribed!

HOW DID I MISS A COMPLETED FIVE CHAPTER FIC FROM YOU?

That was actually excellent. Your first fic here too! Yes I have just scrolled down your list and read them all (or all your shorter ones)...
I loved the different perspectives. Particularly Lily’s boyfriend. Never read that perspective before.
Ending with Peter was an amazing choice too.
I can see why you ended it there but I also want more because I want a happier ending! But I can always go onto one of your other fics for that hahaha
You are one of the best Jily writers ever! Thanks for keeping this fandom strong and producing good quality fics

Very powerful, especially since it was Peter, and you demonstrated that despite his choices, Peter was a friend once.

Excellent!

Wow! Favorited without a doubt. O.M.G! This story is so good. I literally screamed when I read the last sentence. I. Wanted. More. The ending is perfect of cause but I'm greedy. Well this story made me greedy. There's so many great parts but that moment when Peter talks to Sirius right after listening to Lily's dilemma, and Sirius tells him not to tell James because he's sick of that stupid girl Lily...oh gosh, just thinking about that part has me laughing. Thank you for this story! Damn I would have loved Sirius's perspective too. That would have been something. Thank you again. 10/10

WOW. Peter did something right. Makes me remember that he was a good friend and was a good Marauder once. So glad he got the two of them together. This was a great piece. Thanks for writing!

I know it's a very long time since this has been published, and you might not even be active on ff any more, but wow. As I was nearing the end of chapter 5 I was so certain you'd leave it just with everyone's lips sealed, too afraid to say anything, too afraid to tip the status quo. I really think you've done something very different from most authors - you humanized Peter, you proved that yes, he made mistakes (awful ones at that), but he was a lot more than a backstabber - he was also a friend, a Gryffindor...Loved the fact that he stood up for Sirius, stood up for something he believed in, and even if in the end he cost his friends their lives, this small little thing made a whole lot of a difference - because there would never been a Harry without a Lily and James.

Oh. . unbelievable. Wowowowowowoowowowowoowowowowowowowowowoow!
Also crying cuz we don get to see them get together but yayyy! You caug& me completely offgaurd and im so happy u did