OMG! This was beautiful, powerful, emotional; a new understanding of Macavity.

I liked the whole part where he was arguing with himself.

‘Do you? Do you truly contain a heart?’

“Of course I do, I love her!”

‘Then why do you try to hurt her?’

“I don’t try to hurt her!”

This will definitely be added to my favorites list!

Well done! I think you've done very well with this story! I like the way you had Macavity kinda fighting himself. Very good! ;D

You know, I liked that. I liked the way you ended it. There were some times you replaced "a" with "I". "I loving heart" should have been "a loving heart." But aside from that, I also liked how you described Demeter's fear of him compared to the others. Very nice. Keep up the good work.

This was really good i loved it! *Favourited.* Please write more!

Ooh, nice twist at the end there _~ Good story, especially for your first one. Welcome to the fandom and I hope you write many more fics in your time to come _

How pretty. This is really impressive for a first fanfic. I like you.:D

It seems that everyone is in-character, and your emotion and voice is powerful. I like how you reveal something to shocking in the epilogue so simply. You've done good job! *thumbs up*

Write more soon,

~:3 Hyper Strudel

P.S. Favorited!