This is the second time I've read this and I still love it. It's so brutal and cold but full of feeling. Just excellently done! Seeing this side of Kyle and such a unique take on Kenny is extremely refreshing.

hey i loved your story and i hope you can read mine all about hannah life and i hope we can be friend from wolf 2000 rocks

oh i am a girl

Whoa there, girl. This takes on a MUCH more serious tone than your Stan/Kyle fics. You weren't kidding when you said that!

One of the things I love about powerful stories are their symbolic references, and their casual repeating OF those symbolic references. Lines, of course, is an appropriately fitting title, and I absolutely adore how you incorporated Kenny's gray-graphite drawings in, and then compared it to the gray-graphite etchings on his headstone. So sad though. Kyle killed him regularly? Just because? But he really loved him? That makes an odd amount of sense.

Like I've said before, you have a unique way of writing anything you submit. Most people (me included), choose 1st person present or 3rd person past. You've broken those rules and then some. This is even 2nd person. Placing the reader into the story, which causes the reader to feel something that he/she might not normally feel if he/she is reading the story from a narrators POV, or even the character's POV. Unfortunately, it also makes it a bit more difficult to understand, I admit. Still, I appreciate and welcome the difference.

This doesn't really feel like too much of Kyle OR Kenny's character, but I guess that's whats so great about SP fanfiction. They are so young on the show, its your liscence to create their older selves pretty much anyway you want, right? Am I going to get sued for that statement? Ha. Job well done on this one :)

These constand Kenny/Kyle stories are converting me into a shipper. O_O Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. ;)

Angsty, very angsty, but I love teh angst. Awesome story.

Short review, cause I have to catch up on reviews...

Much Love - Lumina Lin

Gah. Just gah. I love the way you write it so, so much that I'm starting to love Kyle/Kenny, too.

Dark Creepy and Sad!

But very awsome.

You know, I love Kyle and Kenny too! I've made two fics about them, but... I've given up on both because no one reads them. \

But this is good. I'm personally in an angsty mood myself, and this was a quite excellent of a read.

You've used the second person quite well here, too-I'd so show it to my AP English teacher if it weren't so depressing in her eyes (she's just recently divorced and is not so good on angsty material). It's like... "HA! 2nd Person is NOT as evil as you think!"

I do hope you feel better though. And you have quite the excellent writing style, too. Those last lines were harsh too... ahh I love this to no ends...

Secret KyleKenny shippers unite! _

~Zak.