Hello there, your story looks very promising, but you have a mistake in the czech translation. I'm from the Czech republic and the sentence is "Ty jsi povýšený muž." I hope you will returt to this story ;) sorry for bad english

Would love an update for this sgofy, I'm hooked, lol

pleasepleaseplease wirte more :):)

I really loved this story and I want to know how it ends

so please write more :)

Very interesting story, I would love to see another chapter... If you are still writing that is... I always seem to find the stories that have been abandoned and become attached... Hope you get this...

I hope that you update this soon. It is really good so far and I would like to read more.

You have good character development. please update soon

Oh gosh this is absolutely amazing. The way you write Rodney and John is dead on, I love the reactions they have and your style too. Man I can't believe this is your first SGA slash fic, it's wonderful. D:

Ah gosh I really hope to see more soon!

i hope for an update soon as I enjoyed this and like the plot idea. x

Just found this story.. Love it, keep up the great work:)

Oh dear. Rodney is taking his 'fall from grace' very hard; it doesn't bode well for the coming off-world op. I have to admit that I'm deeply interested in how you are going to deal with their 'feelings' for each other. At the moment there doesn't seem a cat in hell's chance that Rodney will face up to their 'moment', but it will have to come, surely.

Really super introspection on both McKay and Sheppard's parts. You portray them to perfection and I'm so longing to know what happens next?

Love the morning-after tension and angst. Just started this, so I'm looking forward to how it goes from here!

You should post this on Wriathbait

aw! I love McShep stories! this is a great one...would there be a third chapter to make them realize somethin' happened?

You must update. NOW!

I love it. It could use some editing, but its a great story so far. Please continue!

Ella