Holy shit, I had been on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what had been going on, but this chapter drops the bombshell and man, I'm still reeling! Drake is a loathsome piece of garbage, and for one moment you gave him a scintilla of humanity. Even more, you had it all come together in a way that made sense!

I look forward to seeing this continue. :)

YES! I keep forgetting that I am seeing farscape swearing peppered through your stories. :D
one of my favorite realities to watch.

I totally love that line. "charming lack of self awareness."
it's charming... I can actually see those kinds of moments in all of the Riddick movies.

I love him.
You nailed my ideal of Riddick. :D
Thank you.
:D

I love how this is shaping up so far. :D
but after "Abides", I already love your perspective, and how you give that unique angle for the characters in the stories.

I really wish you would make a sequel this is such a good story!

Can you make a sequel?

I feel like and know this can't be the end

I really hope there's more chapters to come

NICE! ADD MORE PLEASE!

that was really good. I hope there's more coming.

Really hoping you will make a sequel. Liked that she had a choice and that he still thought about her.

Wow. Just... wow.

This was so amazing. I adore this story. One of my top PB/CoR stories here. Will you consider a sequel? I mean, you left this so open ended! It was perfect. Enough closure but I STILL want more, you know? *puppy eyes* Please make a sequel?

This story was VERY well written, and the plot was a pleasure. Im a loyal Riddick/Jack shipper, and even though you didnt give them a HEA in the end, it was still satisfying. And leaves enough room for my imagination to think of Jack as grown up and Riddick coming for her. I like Tir, but really, hes no Riddick. heh.. ;) Im off to read more of your work!

Really really really wish you update this story please!