This was sooo cute :) I loved it.

So, this was perfect and I absolutely loved it! Seriously, though, one of my all time favorites! Thanks for writing it!

I really like that you ened the story right there. I think it kinda emphasises the on-going theme of the fect that this is a relationship with Snape and the reactions to the relationship - I felt like it wasn't about the fluffliness and the happyily-ever-after with children and stuff. You title actually worked into the story throughout and drove that sense of disbelief in the goings on in the relationship. For instance, them going to the fun fair or Snape wearing muggle clothes, driving a car and cooking (I know he's a potions master and all but I truly don't believe they're anything alike) Those moments made you think that this was written almost OOC but the fact that you emphasise that Sev isn't a naturally nice perseon or pleasant in the beginning brings out his normal attributes. You also kept Ron loyal, passionate and slightly hotheaded. The feact that during their first escapade you made Ron top was slightly a shock to me but I think it did show is natural dominant side and his strong demeanor came thorugh

The only person I truly don't beluive was written in charcter was Harry; I just cannot imagine him being the jock who's a player and unsettled and not truly romantic - I think I've read to many post-war Drarry fics in which this portrayl contradicts my usual.

I like that you also add other character's problems such as Hermoine's row with Andrew. The friendships in this were interesting to read about and I especially like Jeremy - wish we actually saw more of him in this what with his flambouyance (no pun intended XD)

My fabourite moments in this were the first time they say I love to each other and the moment when sev feel slightly insecure about the relatioship between Draco and Ron. I won't lie with the given information I would've been worried too but I'm glad he overcame that and plunged forard to get his man. These moments were my avorutie because of how well their written, the scene they take place in and the unusual character traits of Sev. I guess because we're seeing him in and OOC setting of him being emotionally attacthed to someone and letting his emotions show through is what I like the most about the scenes.

All in all this story is really well done. There are a few spelling mistakes, missing words and grammar issues that could quickly be remedied but this story is really good and is one of my favourite from this oairing.

Thank you kindly for sharing this with us!

PLHR

I love this story so much! It was wonderful! :)

I have never read a Severus/Ron fic...and this was AMAZING.

Thanks for making my day :D

that was great, even if the characters seemed a bit out of cannon.

but it was fun.

'Being entertained. Hello Severus, Granger, Granger's person.'

that was the best line ... granger person

Oh it is so hard to find stories for this pairing not to mention good ones! But I find Ron/Snape very interesting, and this is definately my favorite for them so far. Very cute and well-written! I loved it so much, keep writing when you can.

I usually read Hermione/Snape fics with Ron being the other corner of the triangle, and I was looking for one of those when I fell across this one. I also don't read slash very often, only once in a blue moon, but this was really cute! I'm glad I found it, and though Ron is not my favorite character, it's nice not to find him being bash all the time.

Loved it!

Baela

OMG, please write more on this story. I just loved it!

Severus/Ron is beginning to become my fav couple :)

aww so cute. you did that really well, a rare pairing and you still managed to keep them in character. great job. deff adding it to the favs.

So good. I couldn't take a break from it. I loved Jeremy and his hairs.

must make the next of the series of snape and rons romance- they must get married!and honeymoon details!

This is really a very good fic, sexy, not trashy(an uter relief) , I thought all of the characters were very well written with the exception of Harry. Not to say it was terrible, just, you know...no one likes seeing the hero become a slut, other than that i liked it very much, and I usually hate gay fic (but it's usually badly done and trashy.

YAY FOR HAPPY ENDINGS. this was such an interesting fic I couldn't stop reading. You write so well and I love all the situations you put them in. Good job:D

best story ever! you just made me a snape/ron shipper![: