Don't waste your time on this story if you were excited to see an Otogakure raised Naruto. He's basically canon Naruto just with some different skills. He's still a good kid who can't stand to see people hurting or getting bullied. Despite... growing up in... Orochimaru's village... And despite viewing... Orochimaru as a father figure... throughout most of his childhood... I don't know what kind of mental gymnastics the author used to make THAT make sense, but it's none the less what you'll find in this garbage fic.

it's a dead story but crap man talk about fast pace only 2 chapters in and where already halfway through the chunin exams...

Rin&Kakashi.

started off interesting him finding out he was just being used etc etc and then you ruined it.

sigh you say he hates konoha for what they did to him but doesnt mind the old man hokage since he treated him ok so why the fuck would he suddenly just say "i want to be part of the leaf" considering he fucking hates most of the village for trying to kill him...

i can understand him telling the old man what he knows is going to happen but he should of been asking for a free pass out of leaf and fire country not asking to be inducted into the place that hates him and including sakura, ino, hinata and tenten into the harem ... bad bad bad planning imo i cant read anymore from this point on

Love the battle scene awsome story hpoefully there are more to come

i've only read this far of this fic and i saw your AN about the supposed harem and all i can say is "thats a bit much" sure, Tayuya, Kin, femHaku and Temari...all three have a good long history with Naruto but Ino, Sakura, Hinata and Tenten as well? Of the four, I could only see Tenten and Ino actively trying to get noticed by Naruto the latter because of his looks and the former because of his skill. Hinata would maybe become infatuated with him but still be too shy to try anything and Sakura would be to self-centered and concentrated on Sasuke to go after Naruto also she is not deserving!.

Rekka, even with how little she is shown, has already become my favorite OC on this site.

Overall, a very good story... although I think this version better than the Redux.

very interesting i like it so far

there really arent enough Naru/Tayu or Naru/Kin stories out there...im one of those people who prefers the girls that people never use hehe, i especially like Fuuma Kagerou...to bad she dies when she shows the true form...

anyway keep it up

great chapter

lovely chapter

great chapter

hehehe ginshins in quite a pinch

excellent

Please write another chapter soon

keeping tabs on good storys