Please update this story I want to see what happens i love this story even if its a little weird

"he might even go brain dead every once and a while"

Lol wtf

I'm so sorry but I can't seem to create a connection with this setup. There has to be a base of your story, a purpose and you have to follow through there to your aim, however I can't see it here. Your direction in here is like a ship shaking, rotating out of control in an ocean. You'ld bring satisfaction to you readers if you take over the reins of your plot.

Why is itachi so ooc? I was gonna try to ignore it, but holy Fcuck, it's so blatantly in my face I can't help but comment on it. This pretty much completely destroyed itachi's character for no reason other than convenience for your story. I get it's au but still. It pains me. Other than that it's pretty good so far.

Heyah! That gave me a heart attack xD Why didn't you just put breeding rather than cloning. I thought they're similar looking pets there. It's just breeding of pureblood genes right?

I hate cloning. Even though they're animals, therefore 'pets', they're like humans here. They need their rights too...they have a mind of their own, and can definitely share their thoughts.

Sh*t this getting creepy xD idk I think I'm just starting to understand this world. Pets...purebloods...impures...animal abuse to impures...and freaking cloning of the purebloods! Does that mean there is a clone Sasuke there, somewhere. Clone Itachi?! And there would be a clone Naruto!? Nuuuh! They're uniqueness will vanished.

Wait, is it just me, or Sakura's personality is different on Itachi? I remember in the previous chapter that Itachi said she's different when her owner is not around (she said something mean idk I forgot the exact sentence) Also I'm starting to recall that some of the things mention clash on new informations. It's like you forgot them, thus ignoring it.

I just noticed...are you bipolar Sasuke? I mean, on the previous chapters you've stated clearly that you loathe Sakura. And said those mean things to Kakashi. Suddenly, you can tolerate her? And conceded to become her mate, even though you said you don't love her. Tf? xD

i really hope you come back one day to finish this Story, with last time 2010 its hope...now is only 2017
its interesting, the Pairing is nice, the idea is great, ...i really want to know if the get orochimaru and kabuto bevor naruto does it...will he be pregnant too with own kits...

i think sasuke should not kill kiba but castrate him...

but one Thing i dont understand in ch3..they want purebloods...but want to breed a tiger with a Leopard... sure both are large cats but not really the same breed...mhhhh..who knows...
and when sasuke does not wnt sakura ...they could to it in the clinik and he never has to come near her...only his "..." is used for this...and she never would ome in his territory and has to give up most of the Babys..maybe can Keep one of her own...

...this isnt gonna b updated...is it...

So interesting!

Hi there. I've read your other fics and I love them, but this one doesn't seem to be finished. Are you discontinuing this story? It would be a shame if you have. This was a very promising plotline. Especially since you've gotten over 2k reviews. You should be proud :) Just wanted to know if it was finished, or if your busy and is planning to put it out for adoption.