I really loved this :) The voices and everything were absolutely spot-on, and the writing was great! Thank you for sharing! n_n

That was excellent! You really captured Dean and Sam very well. I love the line where Dean said he'd grow tits and worry over his ass - perfect!

This was really good. Keep writing great stories.

*cracking up with Sam*

ah...idk where to start with this!

I loved it all..so much...everything, every word, every image it just fit so well

"“Sammy, c’mon man, don’t do this to yourself…” he paused and added with forced joviality, “and don’t do that to my car… it wasn’t you.”"

this is soo Dean!

and this made me LOL so loud:

“Shut up.” The other man apparently had no intention of elaborating. Sam let him off the hook.

“Dean-”

“Sam.” Dean cut him off.

“Dean,” Sam tried again and again his brother stopped him.

“Sam.”

“Dean!” The younger man was nothing if not persistent.

“Would you stop saying my name!” his brother practically shouted.

“Would you let me finish my sentence?” Sam yelled back.

ahahahaha, boys!

S.

I think this was a good story but you need to consider a different rating K is to low.

“Well then, if you’ve finished dragging me through this Hallmark moment, I’d really like to get back on the road before I grow a set of tits and start wondering if my ass looks too big.”

yea dean

Okay, I just read "Running Late," and I decided to check out your other stories. And I'm so glad that I did! You are now going on my "favorite authors" list.

:)

You made me laugh out loud, at the end! "...if you’ve finished dragging me through this Hallmark moment, I’d really like to get back on the road before I grow a set of tits and start wondering if my ass looks too big.”

And:

"Twenty minutes later, though, Dean threatened to gnaw off his own leg and beat Sam to death with it if he didn’t shut the fuck up."

So funny! Laughing out loud.

This is a great tag to one of my favorite episodes. I think that you've perfectly captured the brothers' voices, and it is an entirely plausible conversation.

I got all teary when Dean brought back Sam's line about how people don't disappear; others just stop looking for them. Telling Sam that Sam could never disappear since Dean would never stop looking. *sniffles* So sweet. And really well-done, on your part, bringing back that bit of history.

Nicely done!

Thank you!

Lovely.

I always thought Dean must have held back when he hit Sam because you couldn't see anything on his face... Really Sammy, you shouldn't be surprised. ts ts.

Great conversation you let them have here. Perfectly written! I never understood how the producers could just let Sam go on as if nothing happened. That's so not Sam...

Awesome. Really well written. You got the dialog perfect

Loved the last line. Great job!

Lovely!

The dialogue between the boys was wonderfully angsty with great snippets from Dean. I could feel the irritated love!

Cathy.

Just now discovered you'd wrote another tag for this episode. Loved that ep, one of the best up 'till then. And loved your story -as usual:) Keep it up!

Dean accepted the gratitude with a tilt of his chin and then moved away from Sam. “Well then, if you’ve finished dragging me through this Hallmark moment, I’d really like to get back on the road before I grow a set of tits and start wondering if my ass looks too big.”

That line right there was just simpley brilliant and totally made the stor6y for me! Great writing!