Well written but I would've preferred Nece to have healed Vala. It really wasn't necessary to kill off Vala in this story.

It is telepathy not telekinesis. Otherwise I love the story

I absolutely love your writing. You have an fertile imagination and a great sense of structure. But unfortunately your spelling and some of your word choices distract from fully appreciating the stories. I know betas are hard to find but I think having a proof reader would help you a lot. Please keep writing ;)

THE QUEEN IS SUCH A BITCH! IM SERIOUS! -sniff- VALA DIED! WAH! oh and cool story. depressing but realistic :P

I was kinda hoping Vala would come back...

anyway thanks for the fic it was great to read

E.

Oh, I know I know! Can Nece' heal Vala as well? Please? Great job on her gift, I didn't see it coming,it was a great idea! Now, what happened to Vala? Update sooner *grins* curiosity is killing me! (and I'm not even a cat!)

Hugs,

Myosotis

OMG LOL shes a zombie :)

dont know if im gonna cry or not might have to wait for the next chapter to find out ;)

E.

the plot gets thicker and thicker :)

E.

Wow, things went from bad to worse in each chapter! I feel so bad for the team. I'm really intrigued about this little princess and what her deal is. I can't wait to see where you take this. Great story!

hey

Thats an excdellent chapter, as you said plat thickens...

E.

hey glade to see chapter 3 up, can't wait for more

is the princesses 'gift' the state of crops? or is it a coincidence?

E.

Wow! I like this new story a lot, the plot is really, really interesting and as always, very original! I can't wait to see what happens to Nece' and her rite and of course to SG1...poor Vala. No good deed goes unpunished, as they well say. I can't wait for next chapter! Thanks for sharing, hugs!

Myosotis

Please continue with this story!

This is a great story. You write the characters very well. I like the team dynamics. Enjoy all your stories. Stargate and Farscape are my obessions. Thanks