I really liked this story. However, as most others have stated, there are quite a bit of grammatical errors. I strongly recommend having someone proof read your stuff. Still a good story and keep up the good work.

"Osaka watched chewing on a melon bread."

I find that line so funny for some reason...

Actually I liked it. The spelling errors got less and less and the story got better and better. Good job. Please write more.

awesome!

love it. good fic. try a continuation for Yukarix Nyamo

Sweet story! I really enjoyed reading it.

thru it?

sorry theres nothing that kills romanticness than poor spelling and grammar, romance is written in writing. how are you supposed to pull of good content when you cant spell a common word

A few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but still a decent story. I enjoyed it. It was nice to have Yomi be the one to confess to Tomo for once, rather than the opposite, which seems to be more common. And, yeah for YukarixNyamo!

Well, this is surely a fine piece of writing here. But there were a few quirks here and there.

First off, when I first saw the story, it looked like it would just be another story with an overly-used storyline. After all, who HASN'T seen the "secret admirer" plotline used over and over again? Secondly, parts of the story made it a bit predictable. I'm mean, when you first see a romance story involving Tomo, you instantly think that she'll be paired up with Yomi. This was most evendent in the third chapter when Osaka thought the secret admirer was "good with words". And lastly, there was a spelling error. "Thru" should've been "Through". Just a minor thing there.

I'm not saying that the fact that all of this made it obvious that Yomi was the secret admirer, cause I enjoy the Tomo/Yomi pairing, but it just got in the way in my view, though I was pleased when you said you might've considered Kagura to the secret admirer.

Overall, this was good story. I absolutely loved the scene with Yomi and Tomo hugging while Tomo was crying. It was just so freakin' adorable. I'm such a huge sucker for hugging and crying, which I happen to be proud of. Plus, while reading that scene, I was listening to "The Arms Of Sorrow" by Killswitch Engage. Hell, I'm even listening to it as we speak while I'm writing this review! It'll be among other songs by Killswitch Engage and other artists (Disturbed, Bad Religion, Funeral For A Friend, Avenged Sevenfold, Atreyu, Rise Against, among others) that I'll use for my many upcoming songfics.

In conclusion to this ridiculously long review, my longest one to date I may add, this was just simply put, a nice overall effort. I hope to see more from you, since you have quite a bit of potential. That was obviously quite a statement from an experienced user like me to an up and coming author like you (at least in the Azumanga Daioh world). You definately have the ability to make awesome stories. Again, I hope see more from you.

Yay! Such a cute little fanfiction, im so glad Yomi was the admirer. (Tomo/Yomi Fave Paring) Well done to u *thumbs up* 10/10 _

e this story is exciting! i can't wait till you reveal who is her admirer. you got me biting my desk in suspence!... okay maybe not literally, but darn close _

~Sista

ooh another letter!, i wonder what Tomos gonna do now XD

I'll guess that the admirer is Yomi. And fun story so far. )

aw lovin this so far, cant wait to read more -_-

Love it. Dont keep us waiting too long to find out who it was.