Loved it! you should continue!

*I kneel in front of you where you stand and wrap both arms around your legs*

I love you.

Sweet. I don't think I've ever read a story on Frex's point of view and I have to tell you it was rather well-done, not mention well-written. Overall, I am so loving it.

Love it ! Don't know what else to say. I love how Frex has premonitionary (is that a word? Whatever) dreams, and everything's just...perfect!

Cardboard, your skill at creating a situation and exploring it in such detail is amazing. Your ability to reach straight into a character's head and display their thoughts and emtions so powerfully, in that same level of detail, is even more amazing. Your use of diction is skillful. In all honesty, I think you are the best writer I have ever read on and I think that you have the potential to be a great author. I say potential because you have not, as far as I can tell, attempted a work of any great length, or explored any universal themes. I'm rather interested in if you could maintain such a quality of writing in a larger work, and moving away from pure powerful characterization.

wow, that was incredible. I'm usually not a huge fan of bookverse, but that was just amazingly written. The imagery, the language, everything was just perfect. And I loved the last part when Frex took Elphaba in his arms, you rarely see that part of Frex.

Oh, and on a side note, purple and green are my favorite colors!

this is really good. i've never read any Wicked so i don't know what the real story line is but this is really good.

I *am* reviewing. Like, right now.

I thought this was really good! This is *the* best Frex/Elphaba (not *that* way, you morons :P) story I have ever read. The thoughts and descriptions and...just everything were perfect. I highly question your statement concerning your not having the book. It was wonderful. :)

Wow. Just... wow. That was AMAZING. Are you SURE you didn't have the book handy? Because this sounds like it could have been written by Gregory Maguire himself. And that is praise that I do not give lightly. I don't know if you were planning to have this be a oneshot or to continue it, but I would love to see more of this story. Not enough people take the initiative to write stories dealing with Frex and Elphaba's relationship in the book. Kudos to you for bravely going where few have gone before - and extra credit for succeeding!

Aww, I really liked this fic. Great job!

Aw I really like this one!