I have to say this story doesn't seem to know what it wants to be. I love the pairings and the characters were fun but the story never really went anywhere. We didn't really witness a progression, not in any of the main characters. And I feel like it went on too long. It could have been a great love story but there wants any actual progression there either. It all seems to have happened like turning on a light switch. We never really get decent ecplainations for the gargoyles or for the Golden Trio's comas. There are some allusions to Dumbledor grooming them for certain positions but we see little actual evidence of that. in fact we see everything from a very strict and one sided point of view. It's mediocre at best.

Baubles not bobbles

Astoria not Asteria

I like this story so far

omg omg loved it, you have to create a sequel of some sort, maybe ron, harry and hermione or there kids decide to cause trouble and they have to face everyones, especially the kids, fearsome wrath. i don't think there should be a full story maybe just a one shot so that we can see who else has kids and how many more there are, and how they act.
ps eagerly waiting for another chapter of blood and bone.
-101JRae

you are an amazing author, and i absolutely love the book, unfortunately i must stop reading now for i do have to at some point in the day, but i will most definitely have to finish reading this, and i am sorry that i have terrible grammar i am not good at language arts.

i have decide that you are now one of my favorite authors and that i will read every single on of your stories, it is very late where i am so i am too tired to read this entire story tonight but i most likely will read another chapter anyway ad will most definitely finish it as soon as i wake up. if you have a watt pad account please do search me up id really like to talk to you, like i said in my earlier comment my account name is 101JRae. i'll comment soon.

I love this story! It was wonderful and entertaining to read.

What a fantastic ending to another one of your fantastic fics! I'm not going to lie, I teared up a little at the end- too much cuteness! Can I ask what the names mean?

The freaking Trio... I absolutely love the books, but since reading fics like these you can definitely see the bias in the writing. They are a bit holier-than-thou at times aren't they? And I love the way you write Snape! :)

I am glad she wasnt raped, that Draco stopped it. But why would there be problems when everybody finds out? Crabbe deserves to go to Azkaban, so not even Slytherins can say that he doesnt...and why would Molly and Arthur cause more trouble? They should be happy that Draco saved her, especially now that he is in Order.

I don't care what anyone else says. This story is wonderful. I love it to pieces. And It is definatly one of my favorites. Thank you so much for sharing it with us all.

Okay, firstly I would just like to point out that the plot for this story was amazing. I couldn't put this down all day. However, I do have some constructive criticism to add. If you find it useless or invalid, just ignore me, its just my opinion, so many other people may have completely other views on the story.
1. I found some of the characters very OOC, the trio of course, but then that was for the plot so I have no problems with that, however the characters of draco ginny and snape I found where a bit too OOC. I felt that the characters didn't have as much depth as they could have been and that there personality's (especially draco's) was very different from the book, making them slightly harder to relate to.
2. Overall the plot was great, but I found that there wasn't enough detail gone into some acpects of it and that, of course, there where characters I would have liked to find out more about, e.g. With what happened at ginny at st. Mungos, there wasn't a lot of detail gone into it, it wasn't really needed, but I found myself rather disappointed that I didn't find out more. Also I would have liked more detail of mollys treatment of ginny and why, both before and after the possession as I was slightly confused as to the why of mollys actions. I would have also liked to have found out more about her familys reactions as you only really said rons and charlies, I was especially curious about her fathers (why he allowed it to happen etc) and bill and percy.
Overall this was a thoroughly enjoyable read and I hope I haven't annoyed you in any way by my criticism, basically all you really need is more depth.
Thank you for your time

i loved LOVED THIS

amazing story! :)