| Reviews for Robotech Drabbles |
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Guest chapter 257 . 7/25 So happy to see you writing again! The new stables are just as poignant, funny and sweet as before. Keep then coming! |
Adena McGee chapter 257 . 7/25 Awww he’s freaked out. That’s sweet. |
Doofus87 chapter 256 . 7/24 Poor Max, it's one thing to teach a kid to drive a car. To check them off in flying a combat airframe? That's a whole other ball of wax. And of course, Rick, being a good friend and capitalizing on how to mess with Max all the while. :D One thing stuck out to me, I'm not sure that "Sardonically" is fitting all that well in that passage. The tone that I was getting up until that was not coming across as 'mockingly derisive'. I don't know if you're wanting to emphasize more of Rick having an jovial moment with Maia, or the fact that Rick is enjoying the prospect of messing with Max. For the former, maybe 'smiled mischievously', if the latter perhaps 'smiled devilishly.' Glad to see you are keeping up the good work. :) |
LoneWolfOneill chapter 256 . 7/23 love it, nothing like going inverted. |
Adena McGee chapter 256 . 7/23 Uncle Rick and his bad influences I see, lol. |
Adena McGee chapter 255 . 7/23 lol, going from a sauna to a cold shower |
Guest chapter 256 . 7/23 :) |
theicemenace chapter 255 . 7/22 Coward! |
Doofus87 chapter 255 . 7/22 Well, hot damn. Not an unreasonable reaction from Rick (which I hope that this is prior to "To the Stars" else Mr. Hunter there needs to get the dickens knocked into his skull and sent back to his gorram wife. But I digress.) Glad to see you back to gift us with your craft. Tour ability to work well with these short snippts never ceases to amaze. Both in your skill, and in the conciseness of the drabbles. I know I can't for the life of me work with only 100(ish) words for a self contained scene. Heck I can barely make a scene work without going over 500. Keep up the good work! |
theicemenace chapter 253 . 7/22 Getting interesting... |
LoneWolfOneill chapter 254 . 7/22 i love these, missed reading them. |
Adena McGee chapter 254 . 7/22 3 what a lovely sentiment! |
Louise Czuba chapter 253 . 7/22 I’m so happy to read your new Drabbles, DW! I need them so much right now. Hope you and your family are well. |
lady aracne chapter 253 . 7/22 looove it, thanks |
Adena McGee chapter 253 . 7/22 I can only picture that panel of the Sentinels comic when Lisa jumps him and I’m laughing all the way. I’m glad your Robotech muse has come knocking again. ;) |