I do love your plots.

Aaaaaaaa amei
Nossa ficou perfeito

what the hell im do8ng review a 11 years old fanfic.
cause im feeling nostalgic after Clear Card Arc.
and decide that a good read deserver gpod review no matter how ols is it.

this one s a Gem.
tho i still wonder what happen to ninty thousand dollarover budge.

poor 'Mark

LOVELY :)

I loved it! I fell in love with Sugar Daddy; so, I'm very happy I came to check out more of your stories. This short story was great! Thank you for another awesome read. It was funny, romantic, warm, sexy, and a lot of fun!

I Love how she dropped the bomb on him about the pregnancy. And I loved the lemon

Sweet! Like a romance novel! But it does sound like Jayne Ann Krentz's book. Oh well, fanfiction is about that life so... KEEP ROCKIN'

/ great story though even though they are in charge they are getting away with a lot of stuff there..

LOL wen I read that there was footsteps I thought that it would b Eriol... I dunno it juss seems like Eriol would b the perfect person 2 fit the situation... buh that must b sooooo embarrassin omg... like isnt it common sense 2 hide? o.O... lol I loved the part where it says “do you want to hear the explanation before of after I tell u im pregnant?” n I loved Syaoran n Mark’s reaction xP... awww it was sooo cute wen Syaoran was jealous of Mark... LOL 1 of my favorite parts of the last chapter was the endin where she says “dont 4get 2 lock the door”... great job the story events were unexpected... made the story even better! xD

~*pika*~

This is a lightly re-worked plagiarism of Jayne Ann Krentz's "Perfect Partners"

While my memory is very good and I was almost sure I recognized the dialogue within the first few lines, what clicked for me to recognize the novel, which I happen to own, was that the CEO was in a relationship with the LIBRARIAN President of a company. Also telling is you didn't even bother to change the names of the minor characters when they are mentioned: Beth from the girls in the bathroom and Mark from the 'epilogue'.

Chp. 1 is lifted almost word for word from p. 291-298, just a few changed names (Letty Thornquist to Sakura, Joel Blackstone to Syaoran, and Phillip Dixon to Eriol), a few extraneous lines added, a few others cut out, a few others massaged lightly, and anything specific to the original novel's greater plot removed.

The Chapter 2 'clean shirts' comment up through the end of the 'living together' conversation is from p. 301.

In Chp 3 the conversation about 'Sakura's inheritance is lifted from p. 335-337. The '2 months later' section is, again, pretty much word for word from p. 337 - 339, just altering a couple paragraphs, names, removing the company's name and changing the dollar amount 'Sakura' was over budget (which were also changed to different amounts the two times a number is given).

I don't recognize the rest of chapter 2 or the proposal of chapter 3, and given the similarity to the grammatical error consistent throughout your one-shots, it may possibly even be original. However, the fact remains, you did plagiarize the parts listed above.

Omfg that was friggin adowable!

Hell I love this more and more each time I read it! Brilliant! :D

Really great story! Although I wish I knew were the 90,0 bucks went :))

funny and nice ending! love it haha the part where Eriol walked in on Saku and Syao was the best. if i was Saku i wouldve died right then and there! ahaha! V