Oh wow, this is so... awwwwww! ;-;

This made me sad just reading it. It's so sweet, but so tragic at the same time... your writing is amazing.

If you hadn't said at the end, I'd never have guessed English wasn't your first language. Not in a million years.

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, you captured the emotions so perfectly.

Wow... I read this a while back but didn't really read it, read it but this time... Great job with the story. The nice blend of ice and fire really added realism to the tempo of the story. It really caught my attention. It's kind of funny that I read this story now since I just started writing a tragedy yesterday and can't figure out where to go.

I think I have to re-read your other stories again to find out what things I missed in them now. :D

This story is so fun! Please continue it! *Sparkly eyes* Pwease?

That was wonderful! You are a great writer, even if English isn't your native language. I love Marth X Zelda, but Link X Zelda is okay, too. I'm totally faving this! There were some grammar mistakes, but I still enjoyed reading this.

I read your profile first, and to be perfectly honest I was scared to click the link . . . But I'm glad I did. I did notice a few things were off, but rest at ease even natives to the language make those mistakes. The story was touching, nowadays it's hard to find stories such as these on FF. I can hardly imagine how much better it would be if you were to write in your native language! (Though I wouldn't be able to read it, I know it would be fantastic!)

Great job!

I have to admit, I wouldn't of read this if it weren't for the summery. This is pretty good. Very good infact. I guess it's better for the reader to decide what happened to Zelda, it makes the story more memorable (sp).

Too bad I don't like the charaters...(The reason why I didin't want to read this at first)

-A crappy reviewer

I would have never guessed English was not your native language; this piece was nicely written. The only mistake I could find in this was how you wrote speech. See, it not (“Her tears”,) it's (“Her tears,”). But that's it. I loved it.

Wow... That was quite a one shot! _ I thought it was very creative and nicely written, just a few grammar errors, but I think you would catch them if you reread your one shot again. There are some stuff that I was kind of unsure if it's something you should really use when writing, but I guess it's alright. Very nice... I thought it was really interesting to see the love that Link and Marth had for Zelda. Good job! Have fun writing other ZeldaxLinkxMarth triangles! XD

-BKP

I like it _, the only problem is the fact that I don't understand what's happened to Zelda.