| Reviews for Mating Rituals of the Viera |
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   AltenativeFutureFan27 chapter 17 . 8/12/2015 You have an A this Awesome Report |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/26/2012 It's 'recent' not "resent". 'Resent' would mean having sent something again-that or resentment. It's 'greater good' not, "better good". It is terrible grammar and unfit the high class Archadian dialect spoken by gentry such as these two. Also, do not capitalize 'male' and 'female'. Other than that, the story itself is good. Execution of technical details require attention is all. |
| Uva Ramune chapter 17 . 11/4/2012 Oh my! How educational, I do believe I have enough info to get started on a fanfic myself. It may not be official info but it's written now so it shall be. Greatly written, quite humorous and lovable :) |
| shadowsythe13 chapter 9 . 8/12/2010 I love the info |
| partner555 chapter 17 . 4/9/2009 I liked the story |
| BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 17 . 10/12/2008 Badass. This is getting favorited! |
| Shizuru Came chapter 16 . 10/4/2008 OH. MY. GOD. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. VIERA FLYING GLOMP IS NOW MY SIGN OFF. |
| Heaven1y-hands chapter 1 . 6/10/2008 I remembered this story from deviantart. I love this story! I hope you update this soon! |
| Tersa chapter 11 . 5/22/2008 I have to stop reading at this chapter since I've been at it, oh, an hour, and I have work in the morning, but I must say... My god, woman. You win! I love some laughter mixed with my coupling, and I've been giggling all the way. Brilliant, absolutely BRILLIANT! And nice picture on your Deviant account... I'll log on over there and comment soon. XD Ah, Fran, reduced to acting like one of us... |
| Xyjah chapter 17 . 5/20/2008 I've thouroughly enjoyed reading your fic I love your way of writing. Its very creative and keeps me reading. I plan on moving onto your next story that you say you have posted. Keep up the good work. |
| Xyjah chapter 6 . 5/20/2008 I've recently started playing the game over myself. And talking to the residents I think this is very interesting. Also if you do the quest where the Viera is looking for a soul-mate the guy she ends up with says he was inspired by a hume and veira couple he say one day. |
| Xyjah chapter 4 . 5/20/2008 Wow I'm really digging this story. I like the Fran x Bal portions as well as the explanation portions. This is very creative. |
| Xyjah chapter 1 . 5/20/2008 What an interesting start lol |
| THOMASNATOR chapter 8 . 4/17/2008 Inferno. Where you said hell. Inferno. Have you not returned to the stiltshrine with the stone? no doubt, slain the monsters that lay around the way stone? check the besitary. Yiazmat is a pain. ~ |
| Blueezy chapter 16 . 1/10/2008 hey you finished the story! good for you!~ lol...being with fran does seem to be hard on a man...the flying glomp and all. but i'm sure balthier enjoys it. |
