I loved it and I'm not a huge BL fan. You write crazy well :)

I have one question...why couldn't be more to the story. if you plan to write more let me know because i don't like the ending

Lucas is such an ass in this one-shot but your writing was amazing. I think you should write another part and make it happier. I just miss our Brucas so I tend to not read a story if Brucas don't get a happy writing but I have to say this story was beautifully written.

it's good...but you made him . I kind of have a hard time imagining him so callus.. but maybe that's just me

I loved the story I think it is great but since m the biggest brucas fan it kind of depressed me how lucas used her. but great story.

Amy x

i have read this story three times, and even though its a one time thing, i wish u would continue

i thought this was a very good oneshot...i'm not for leyton at all...obviously cause of my screen name...lol...but this was a very good story!

wow. that was just... wow. I'm completely speechless. in a good way, that is.

that.

was.

amazing.

loved it update soon

i'm so sad right now. lucas is an Ass! I want to throttle him myself! however you are a wonderful writer even though Brooke's self worth just went straight down the tube into the pits of Hades! hahaha

omg, so sad

seriously - brooke always ends up hurt

i'm seriously gonna have to kill lucas one of these days! peyton too!

even though she ended up alone there was something beautiful about it because it glorifyed brucas

totally heartbreaking

you're a great writer!

i wanted to like this, but it wasn't very well developed. it didn't have an arc, as a story should (beginning, middle and end) regardless if it is a one-shot or not-length has no bearing on that. It was very much just a summary, not a story.

Hey that was a freaking awesome story...i hope you write more like it...i was so absorbed i felt like i could be a character in the story...please write more like this or even just BL stories ~snowbabie~

Iliked it i wish it waslonger tho ]...