Very interesting story. It adds a nice twist on the kind of thinking we are familiar with, the Freedom Fighter kind, and it's nice to see a well-developed, original character for once. Five stars out of five.

Oh man! talk about suspense! After nine, INCREDIBLE chapters, I'm just as exhausted as Sonic! You're an amazing author, and this story just... seemed to come alive! As if I were right there with them. That takes alot talent! I hope you'll write more Satam stories because you're one.. of few.. who UNDERSTANDS this world and it's characters.

Thankyou, for writing such an incredible story! Sorry for the lousy comment. I'm not good at expressing myself.. O_o _

Wasn't all that bad, really.

The dialogue didn't look like hell, and the description did what it was supposed to.

Bland and faceless characters, some camp, some silly stuff, some stupidity, but nothing major - for the first time in ages.

Spelling, vocabulary, and general usage of english - all good.

Characterization, description, pace, action, and emotions - lacking.

That was just silly.

Don't try your hands at deep stuff if you don't know how.

Sally's a leader, and leaders don't show emotions to their followers - in order to maintain control and order.

Sonic doesn't lose to anyone, because he's superior on all levels.

Play him like the hero he is.