It's Sir Didymus and Ambrosius.

Love the informal letter at the end. Keep him on his toes, indeed. I wonder which of the Williams's children she really means ! ? !

I'm off to the Moon Mad King.

Until again.

I love the idea of teleportation by moonbeams. It's so fitting and mystical and all of that stuff we all love so much.

Until again.

Your two or more person dialogue is sharp and funny. Your monologue for Toby was a bit too old for an eight year old.

Another point. Demeter was the EARTH goddess for the Greeks. ARTEMIS was the virgin goddess of the hunt and the moon. One of her wishes to her father Zeus was that she be known by many names, DIANA being one of them.

Yes, I'm enjoying the tale. I just want you to get the boring details correct !

More to come.

Your informative banter was lovely as well as lively.

More to come.

Love the lilting style that you presented for Sarah's dance. One correction though. The Moon rises in the EAST and sets in the WEST. That's because of the Earth's rotation. Also, full moons don't always occur at night. The moment of fullness can occur at any point in the day or night.

Will continue.

I think you wrote an excellent story:-)

Keep up the good work

Dawn

Congratulations, you wonderful little author!

Your story has been selected for addition into the C2 archive “Polished and Shining!”.

Listing in this archive not only determines your knack of storytelling and innate talent for the written craft, but may give you the recognition you deserve. Your hard work and determination has paid off, and your story is not only compelling, but shines as one of those rare gems that readers often search for in vain.

I humbly wish you the best of luck in all your future written endeavors.

We, the readers, thank you for this unexpected pleasure!

Sincerely,

~Maiafay

Great chapter(of course). I noticed you tend to forget to put an "r" at the end of "you" or the other way around. But that's about it for the spelling errors. ;D

Jareth is so funny and so is Tobby. The Golden Chicken is hilarious! I really love this story and am very excited for the next one.

I finally found time to read this! -does Happy Dance-

XD That was an awesome chapter. I had no idea lemon was anything other than a fruit. XP I love how Sarah and Jareth got back and everything afterwards.

I love this story. I can't wait for the next part. Well, guess I'll talk to you when you start to make it. Until then, *bows*, I bid you adieu.

AUGUST? *sob*

I'll be waiting...

I really love your story and I can't wait for the sequal. Poor Jareth has his hands full. Don't keep us waiting too long!

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