I enjoyed this. It was a very different view on Zack and Cloud's time in the lab. I enjoyed it.

-Spark

...oh.

That. That was... marvelous. Oh bloody hell, that was effing wonderful. Just... Vincent, hearing them, hearing Hojo, and staying right where he is in his coffin... e. My fangirlism has been wonderfully sated. fav~!

Excellent. Believable, in character.. this is one of those stories that is going to be incorporated into the game timeline in my head. Next time I play ff7 I'll be confused. "What, there wasn't a scene in the lab flashback where vincent woke up to voices screaming?"

Wow. This is an angle I don't think anyone's explored yet. Very unique, powerful, and poignant. It makes sense too! I really like the descriptions, especially the part where Vincent is figuring out what all the different sounds mean.

Oh-so-very dark and beautiful... I love your word choice, it seems like everything is precise and perfect. I love the description of Vincent's deciphering what's happening down the hall as well. Very interesting idea, very well delivered.

Good job with the descriptions. I loved it. Keep up the good work.