| Reviews for Soul Mirror |
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meg chapter 15 . 10/29/2017 this story’s progression was hard to follow and the characters were not really that well developed. I know it make take longer to write but I would suggest giving your stories more depth. You seemed focused on the way you articulated, which isn’t bad, but you should not focus purely on vocabulary and structure. The story isn't really a story if you don't develop the plot enough |
laelruin chapter 15 . 7/28/2017 This story is cute! It feels a little rushed in places but it's meaning is clear and it's an interesting read. Thanks for writing it and posting it here! L |
Guest chapter 15 . 9/4/2015 Hmmm...i don't know what to react of this...i mean there wasn't even a romance! Hmp! |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/4/2015 Poor naruto, sasuke was brought back...but then sakura left... |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/4/2015 Wow! Sasuke was a little soft here, ne? |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/4/2015 Does sakura have monstrous strenght here? |
jessikip chapter 2 . 5/26/2015 Love the plot! Making Orochimaru look like he was the one who destroyed the Uchiha clan, haven't seen that before! |
jessikip chapter 1 . 5/26/2015 Just started this story. First chapter was great! |
saku642734 chapter 15 . 1/22/2014 very awesome story! I loved reading it |
The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 10 . 1/13/2014 I really like those little tidbits on Deidara. Very refreshing to read. His pain and suffering and all, that! And don't forget his art! All very characteristically done. |
kagomekurosaki98 chapter 5 . 1/8/2014 So when she says seek, then that whole creepy thing about memories, am I suppose to know what that means or will I find out later in the story. BTW great story. I finally joined the ITASAKU dark side... I feel so empowered. MUHAHAHAHA |
kagomekurosaki98 chapter 5 . 1/6/2014 seek...answers... I am confuzled AF. can you help a bit? |
alabamagirl1997 chapter 15 . 12/30/2013 This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed reading it very much... You did a great job! |
Crimsont3ar chapter 15 . 12/28/2013 Bawling! My carnival ride! I loved this... you really switched the plot on me! :O please, continue writing. I want to read more |
Crimsont3ar chapter 6 . 12/28/2013 Could you pm me the titles to the songs you used please? I really like this book so far! Keep at it :) |