Grrrr... NO! You did not finish. You have to finish it, because the way you left is unfair to those of us who live on plot. We will die. I really like the idea of it tho! I really wish you would have done a part 2, or another chapter. Anyways Thanks for the cool story! -Potato

(I will take chocolate chip cookies please :)

Well I EXTREMELY enjoyed that. So perf

-chants- anotherchapteranotherchapter

It's great. And I really feel for Lily while at the same time I kinda think that james does not quite think heis cheating because Sirius is Sirius and that's different.
I don't think James quite realizes how much he hurts her... poor Lily

This really is absolutely beautifully written. You captured the essence of the characters perfectly and I haven't enjoyed a one-shot so much in such a long time.

Wow.

That was so beautifully written. I feel sorry for Lilly as it must be heartbreaking seeing her husband so happy with another man. Well done with the fic though it brought up some conflicting emotions.

Another beautiful slash fic. You're really quite good at these...

that was so well written but oh so sad, poor lilly :( but yeah you should be very proud of this story :)

Oh my. Poor Lily. Good job, I am pretty sure nothing like this has ever been thought of before.

Aww poor Lily.

James should be a better husband, or at least you know be better at hiding. Or even invite lily !

Though she might be apalled by that ... xD

LyssaLaughableP

this one is even more sad, but loved when jamie kisses sirius's hand *-* poor lilly u_u just in this one :D great! love, pads.

ilike

I was one hundred percent sure I'd already reviewed this but I guess not.

I love this story, I know I've read it multiple times before, I apologize for not reviewing before this, I love the idea of this being the truth...

I don't like the James/Lily pairing beside the fact that it resulted in Harry :D

i am not a fan of slah, but i liked yours cause it was not just the phisical thing, there was emotion. well done!

but it's so sad... i cry.