Damn another great one. Really love your writing. The way you write my fav couple is so plausible, so them. And this one was perfect. And as for my fav part...the whole amazing story! Always craving B&B togetherness.

Great story! Nice take on what "could've happened" between BB. Thanks for sharing it!

Hi. I loved this story. And also the fact that Booth was the one that freaked out, hehe.

I enjoyed reading.

I would like to know more details about the fight between Booth and Buzz. I think I just like the thought of Booth kicking some ass. :)

I liked this. Throughout the story, you wrote so well that i actually felt. I could feel the sadness and happiness and the pangs and everything. I don't get that with Bones fan fiction. At least, nothing compared to this.

I also can't believe how much i was ok with the 1st person. I hate 1st perso, but this was actually ok. Maybe even good. I don't think it could have been written better if in 2nd...

Only there were a couple typos and such which you may want to fix :)

YAY! I like that Booth stood up for Brennan and then BRennan stood up for Booth. Great story. And I'm thinking that SS insn't lookin so nice now...too bad.

Black on Black Chevy SS! Where is this man and how can I hook up with him! Sorry Booth!

Nice story can't wait to finish reading it!

LOved the ending! “A warm up? I thought that was pretty good.” LOL!

I think that the Sully showering, but still gets dumped sounds pretty good!

Ida:-)

Love love love it! I thought it was a perfect touch, and really quite in character, that Booth freaked out and left "afterwards." And their final conversation was wonderful. Thanks so much for writing and sharing this story. I enjoyed reading it.

joliesse,

OMGODDESS! WHAT an AWESOME chapter to END WITH! simply OUTSTANDING! I ABSOLUTELY LOV'D the ups and downs in this one! ONE minute I'm deliriously ecstatic that things are going so well AND the NEXT I'm befuddled with confusions just as Temperance! Only to be left on CLOUD *9*! It was SIMPLY WONDERFUL! I thought Brennan going to Cullen was so brave and well, so HER! I've got to tell you I adored the twist you put on Booth leaving her and then the ending with Booth being the one to doubt the current situation and thier future! THAT WAS SPECTACULAR! I think your writing is AWESOME and can't wait to read more of your lovely works! I'm L king forward to your NEXT adventure! I have to go now and make room somewhere in my favorites for this KEWL fic!

~G :D

Good story.

Favorite part was Brennan being an independent woman having a one-night stand with a biker. That was awesome, however badly it turned out later. I enjoyed her emotionally-detached attitude toward sex with Buzz. That's something people don't write much about with her character.

And it was a nice "happily ever after" too. I completely agree that B&B are already beyond the "line" he mentioned. Cute how you incorporated Bones' drive to succeed in all things and how that would apply to her compartmentalization of emotions and professionalism in the workplace.

Bravo. :)

Boohoo!*sniff, sniff* All my favorite stories are ending and I am so sad. I loved this story. I thought it was so good! Your chapters were so satisfyingly(?) long, and you put so much into them. I can't pick out an unfavorite part because I think everything was essential to the story. I think my favorite part was when Booth was unsure of the relationship. Everyone always writes it as Bones being wary. I liked your take on it. I will add you to my Author's list so then I don't miss any of your stuff, but if you do end up going on hiatus, I completely understand that too! Again, great job and thank you for sharing this awesome story with all your readers. Booth and Bones together in the end, don't you just wish! :)

This is an excellent story. You're doing a good job with the first-person, and I love Booth's dialogue and physical movements. It's so totally Booth. I've really enjoyed reading so far.

Great story. I was looking for something that dealt with those last two eps (okay, not really the last one... I really think it was a little OOC for Brennan to kiss Sully at the Jeffersonian like that). Anyway... this is an excellent beginning... and middle. I'm highly anticipating the ending(s).

Scarlet.

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