Reviews for The Leash
PFC Yolanda Spencer chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
i love it the images are very stronge i felt as though i was there in the room with Ian i felt his humiliation and resentment towards irons this is well written and i would love to read more of ur stories
BelovedOne chapter 1 . 9/30/2002
Oooohhh. Nice insight. So dark. So...*shivers*. Please continue, if you feel so inclined.
Rob1 chapter 1 . 4/6/2002
This story is wonderful- and I almost never gush about a 1 chapter fic! The writing itself is masterful, it completely pulled me in and made me forget I was reading. What makes it an absolute standout, however, are the characterizations. I think you nail both Ian and Irons- and the warped relationship between them. It worked perfectly- really heartwrenching stuff. Ian is my fav, and his relationship with Irons is a big part of that. You captured them perfectly. My only regret is that this is the only story you've written in this fandom. I'm really hoping you write more! Great, great stuff!
Jessica chapter 1 . 9/7/2001
Yikes! Good!
Abyssmorphasis chapter 1 . 8/30/2001
Very well written, has a nice flow, and it is obvious that you are a very good author.
LadyStarlyt chapter 1 . 7/20/2001
wow...thats an impressive story...is there going to be more?
Sherlock Hoka chapter 1 . 7/19/2001
Oh my ghod! I've got to get my heart to stop pounding. You have caught Ian and Irons perfectly. It is just as I had imagined it would be between them. I hope you continue this story line. The style is excellent and tightly controlled. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.
Shai Ryder chapter 1 . 7/17/2001
I absolutely love this! Bravo! Encore! Write more! Please *begs* Ian is my favorite character. :D
Maevestar chapter 1 . 7/13/2001
Oh my gods!This was PERFECTION! I can see this as something they would portray on the show. The tone of this story is so right on! You've crawled into Ian's head for real...Hope you have more in the future for us? Sanguine is a god/dess!
ilovepunchbuggys chapter 1 . 7/11/2001
good really good! i like it a lot!
Shanyetta chapter 1 . 7/4/2001
I like the way you portrayed what may occur behind-the-scenes in the irons household, I believe that Irons could totally do stuff like that to Ian. The story makes you think.

-Shanyetta
Sare Liz chapter 1 . 7/2/2001
This was an incredibly insightful delve into this power relationship that firmed up quite a few errant thoughts I'd been having about it. Thank you so much. Your grasp of the characters ...marvelous. Excellent job. I cannot wait to see what you envision next.
Kitkat chapter 1 . 7/2/2001
Excellent! The descriptions are incredible. I feel Ian's pain, and not just from his physical injuries. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

Keep up the great work.

Kitkat