OH MY GOD I just discovered this cause it was recommended to me and it took my breath away! Seriously! I read so much smut and sensual stories but this might be the first time I blushed asfhlakfhl the chemistry was incredible!

it was beautifully written and i really loved it.

What a gorgeous one-shot. Thank you so much for sharing, and sharing the music that helped you write it. This is the essence of the Jily ship.

this was so enjoyable to read. keep writing..

Ummmm... Everything I wanna say is has already been said before. I do wanna add though that if I ever happen to be in a real relationship, this is how I would want it to start. It's the stuff and fluff of my dreams. :D :')

- Ankita

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. THAT'S ALL I WILL SAY BECAUSE THAT'S THE ONLY TRUTH. DEAL WITH IT.

So intense! This was amazing, I loved everything. Thanks for the writing!

That. Was. Awesome! But, as a reader, I'd like to suggest not using the same line over... and over... and over. I think you could of just used it at the beginning once and at the end once. People will get it better. But over all, great job!

Ugh, this is so good.

Oh my gosh I loved this! Well done!

Loved it!

HOLY GUACAMOLE I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT IT IS THE FIRST TIME I READ IT WHAT HAVE I BEEN DOING ALL THIS TIME IDK
this was so so beautiful and electrifying. I literally closed my eyes and took a deep breath after reading because it affected me in a way that I felt like I was Lily? make sense? probably not. you couldn't have done any more justice to James's character. he would totally have the leaning habit, being all long limbed and tall. I IMAGINED IT AND I AM NOW FANNING MYSELF. so intense- phew! extremely well written probably one of the best out there . thank you so much for blessing us with this beautiful, beautiful piece. Ps I love your name

HOLY GUACAMOLE I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT IT IS THE FIRST TIME I READ IT WHAT HAVE I BEEN DOING ALL THIS TIME IDK
this was so so beautiful and electrifying. I literally closed my eyes and took a deep breath after reading because it affected me in a way that I felt like I was Lily? make sense? probably not. you couldn't have done any more justice to James's character. he would totally have the leaning habit, being all long limbed and tall. I IMAGINED IT AND I AM NOW FANNING MYSELF. so intense- phew! extremely well written probably one of the best out there . thank you so much for blessing us with this beautiful, beautiful piece. Ps I love your name

Amazing story. I always find myself coming back to reread it.

I love how much you focused on the boy lean! Honestly just classic James to do that. Loved it!