Yea unfortunetly something always brings us back down to earth with a bunp! Nicely written though, another good fic! Lol.

I think I may have read this one once already, but I cant really remember...hm. yeah, you're right. I like it, but it does need something. More detail into their 'bar moment' maybe? I dunno, but I like the writing. I especially liked the 8th paragraph. Ah well, go forth with your idea into how to improve it and I'll follow like I always do. D

kara