I don't know what I think. I like the rambling effect - it seems very Daniel but everything else just seemed... not. I'm sorry I can't explain it any better than that. I do like that you touched on "the brfore Jack" and that Daniel gets to share and fear that, that he knows what he is up against in loosing or fighting for his friend.

Thanks, Jen

Yeah, I can see where Daniel's coming from here. Doesn't mean I have to like it, but it's the truth. Jack was really dark in that episode. Well done again.

kara

Wow that was emotional, in a good way though! That was really good. You rarely read Daniel or Teal'c POV on Entity. You got it spot on. Well done.

Very good Jack/Daniel friendship here; I hope you write more!