A great story. I liked the part where Danny wanted to call Aiden but didn't.

Great story!

Bravo, m'dear! Another wonderful piece!

Favorite lines - "God her eyes are some kind of brown." ...and... "Oh MAN. That is one serious death glare from our little country girl. Guess that nickname’s sticking around for a bit. Gets her riled up real good, and she doesn’t do anything but glare. Messer-2 New Girl-0."

Love the scoreboard! And the ending!

I'd say it works out pretty good. Lots of sex and babies, please! We need some mini Messer/Montanas running around! :0P Cute! I like it!

Oh wow! that was brilliant! i really enjoyed it! well done!

Great job :D You've captured Danny's character really well - I can hear him saying/thinking everything he's saying. Especially when he first checks Lindsay out and realising who she is, lol :) I like how you've incorporated his thoughts on the case into the dialogue, weaving them in with what he's thinking about Montana; it makes him much more believable as a character than if he focused entirely on the new country girl. The little score board he's got going on's funny as well :D

Thanks for the fic! Don't suppose you could be persuaded to write a companion piece at all...? :D

Lindz ;)