Reviews for A Pact is Made
Marie chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
Thanks for giving the cocoon a lovely and plausible ending. Shame on the CSI folks! They didn't bother letting the fans know the tail end of it.
rachellara chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Wow, great idea for what the coocoon meant! I was always kinda bummed that it totally disappeared after that episode. Your writing is very imaginative and succinct. It's fun to read, keep going!
toothchick chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! We all assumed that this would be the outcome, but I thought that we were promised that we would find out what was the meaning of the gift was (from TPTB)by the end of the season.
jasminedragons chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
aw, I loved this!

especially the symbolism of the cocoon. :D

R&R mine too? :)
redsox55 chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
SEQUAL! that was a really good job, you should make a sequal, I dont know what in it but a sequal, yu did an amazing job on it!
Quill-32 chapter 1 . 4/12/2007
Gorgeous! I like how you explore both their genuine emotions, and the surprise hidden in the chrysalis. The playful moments are exactly the right addition. Much enjoyed!
thegreatbluespoon chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
If only, if only TPTB didn't suck too bad for that to actually happen!

I loved this!
pandorapoet chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
*sighs* if only this was the way it was really going to end.

great job!
feathergirl926 chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Absolutely adorable! I loved the proposal!
JuanseyLio chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
that was such a grissom thing to do! i loved it!
Veronica10 chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
This was beautifuly done. Its nice to have some fluff amongst the angst.
fnfnztri chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
After the increasing amount of angsty and depressing GSR fics, this somewhat warm and fuzzy fic really hit the spot. awesome job :-D
taramis chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
OMG! BEST! MAKE-UP! STORY! EVER!

I love your description of Sara's feelings - they rang honest. I also love how Grissom realizes how clueless he was too late, and how he talks with Sara about it also fits his style.

I love how you incorporated the cocoon in the story, and the way you interpreted Sara's history with her father and stories about cocoons was incredible.

Your finale was just simply amazing, and I love the description of the both of them snuggled in bed in such a familar position while he gives her the ring.

Wow, wow, wow. You write stories the way I wish I could. Wow. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your stories - thank you so much for sharing this with us!

~taramis
fantasywizard chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
I really enjoyed reading your story. I especially like how you dealt with Sara's negative feelings about Grissom's sabbatical. So many authors kind of gloss over that part. Your story was more in character for both of them than Ive seen in awhile. The engagement ring was a nice touch as well!
geekluvinskater chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
Wonderful story, and so plausible... can we have a sequel :D

Keep up the good work.
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