I can't recall if I reviewed this before but if not, I'm sorry I didn't. This is lovely writing.

I love death fics that move me and this one fits that bill perfectly.

I just about cried when I read this one. :'( It's so sad, but it's so wonderfully well written. I'm having troubles deciding which of your stories is my favorite, because I love all of the ones I've read so far! :) Please write many, many more. :)

Saoirse

WAH! No lynching, that was perfectly characterized! I wonder if a reincarnation-to-Shinigami-dom is in order... What am I saying? ;-; Excuse me I need to go cry myself out.

aww that was so sad (very well-written) but so sad! ... aww, need something fluffy now, very beautiful fic -

JEN! YOU'RE A BITCH! I am going to walk over to your house tomorrow jsut to smack you... and i will smack once for each person that wants to hurt you for killing Hisoka. My Hisoka does not die... if you want to make a torture, that's fine becuase some bondage is rather hott... but no death of my Hisoka.

So anyways, i figured i would post a reveiw becuase i never talk to you anymore. I am looking forward to our date on sunday. I will boogie out like 1949 and kick your ass at dance dance woman! I will have the hot feet... and i won't fall off the machine this time.

I miss you dear sister... and you better read and reveiw Eternity... i don't care if you don't like Gundam Wing, read it bitch.

Love Your Charming Brother,

Donny Bam Bam

I'm too lazy to log-in and too emotional to care.

I hate you.

This hurt so much, and this is officially the first fanfic that has ever got me past teary-eyed to full blown out tears sliding down my cheeks.

I hate you! Your Tsuzuki was Tsuzuki, and your Hisoka was Hisoka. Oh God, Hisoka...

Even your Watari was perfect.

Gah!

*goes off to sob in a corner*

Pretty...and very sad. 'Here is the only place where he still exists' was the most striking, especially coupled with those following lines of description. I was unfortunately a little distracted from the quality by trying to figure out all over again how exactly dead people die and what happens to them when they do. Still, very nice.

*sniff* Jenna you made me cry! Very sweet. But kinda sad. Wondrful job.

JA.

~EH~

i really like it! but it seems a bit short. maybe some more of what tsuzuki felt? i really like!

Damn you (blows her nose again and throws the kleenex on the huge pile behind her). That was so sad and at the same time so beautiful!

God when I started reading it, I thought the words in italic were about the promise Tsuzuki made to Hisoka in Kyoto but as I then read further I started to realise pretty soon that it was about a new promise Hisoka had made him make. And what a promise! Damn, on the one hand I can understand why Hisoka made Tsuzuki promise to live on but on the other hand I can't help but feel that it is a bit cruel cause well it's not like Tsuzuki will die of age and thus who knows how long he still has to go on without Hisoka and didn't he stay for Hisoka after Kyoto so what is left for him now after Hisoka's death beside the memory of his partner? Jeez, so sad!

And then the end lines in italic held so much meaning with Tsuzuki thinking about the fact that it is maybe time to let the memory of Hisoka die and thus also break his promise and make an end to his own eternal live. But who can blame him? If you read about how he has already seen all his old friends pass on and even some of the new friends he has made over the course of time. Makes you realise also that this must mean that already many, many years have passed since Hisoka's death cause to have made new friends must take time and then coupled with the fact that they also have died already means that even more time has passed. You must admire Tsuzuki that he is still around and has kept his promise to Hisoka for so long.

The scene in the infirmary was also well written. You could feel the love and need for each other throughout it without them actuall voicing it to each other. And they were so at ease with each other that even though a terrible fate was awaiting them they were just totally comfortable in each other's presence. So nice and beautiful.

Thanks for this and I'm glad you wrote it.

Kisses and hugs

Gillie

PS: When is there going to be an update for your other stories? (hint, hint, hint.)

...evil...you...are...evil... big scary glare

right, now that i glared at you,

great fic

i would have murdered you if you would have killed tsuzuki...but then again, if you would do that you would make the story so great that i just can't do that

is this that little fic you told me about that kept attacking you during work with the words "write me Jenna...write me!"?

cause if it is then i'm glad you wrote it

anyway, keep making more fics...but first...

update hisoka!

oh! i don't think i want to kill you but that was sure a tear jerker! *tearsniffle* aw! sad, but thats how it goes sometimes huh? fino ad allora,

~!MD!~

Aw...thats sad. (

It's interesting, though, and I like it a lot. Good work. _

aw that's so sad!