(Sarcastically) Oh ha ha, very funny. Don't think i didn't see that twitter post because I did. Listen, I have a good explanation, I'm not a troll but I am however a person who hates life because adults will do anything to make children suicidal (and also me because i really want to commit suicide because of the adult side of the internet). Look, I'm just asking as a friend, please listen. The internet is for children as well and believe me, as much as some of your content on your Youtube channel amuse me like you're fanfic readings and your comic dubs (the child friendly ones) I'm not so much of a fan of you WRITING them as much as I prefer you READING them. Reasons? Well some of your fanfics can be a little (how can i possibly say this politely?) they can be a little horrible due to the amount of shipping/MLP same gender romance/swear words and certain (shudders) adult stuff that I think children may or may not commit suicide over it (believe me, I tried to commit suicide because of the inappropriate side of the internet last year in Summer and I'm not even a kid. Even adults hate profanity too at some point). So please don't think of me as a troll, just don't. I'm only trying to get you and possibly other fanfic writers who don't think of children first (no offence) to see the error of their ways when they make fanfics. I mean, sure, you have made a few family friendly fanfics for example the one with Dinky offering to give Derpy all of her piggy bank money because they were poor but even then you tend to make more fanfics with the romance tag and i immediately know the inappropriate side of the fandom is gonna take even the child friendliest of romances the wrong way when they come across it. So what I'm trying to say is, i just wish the internet wasn't so inappropriate. I just wish they wouldn't be so cruel to children. I've tried to commit suicide over it and if any of you are not careful and carry on doing adult things I'm sure you'll make other children suicidal too. You may think the purpose of life is so people can do bad things but you're wrong when it comes to the opinions of children. Please don't hate this review. And please don't call me a troll again please?

Whoa whoa whoa! Hold it! Scribbler! You started making fanfics since 2007? Don't be ridiculous! Friendship is magic fanfics and your pal TheLostNarrator didn't exist yet!

very well done. nice job!

SHOCK. That's about what I'm in right now after reading this, serious XD I musta read this like 4 times in a row then told my little brother to reead it because it was that awesome. I hate how it's so hard to find good SonxSal ffics nowadays but your's made me happy enough that I can last without them for a while more :D ANywayz, excellent job my friend ;)

AW! *U* This is GORGEOUS! *U* Absolutely amazing! *U* I saw the 'Sally's Father' pic on dA - that's what led me here! *U* LOVE this! One of the best (and only, unfortunately) SatAM fics I've seen! *U* Rock on! The emotions here were utterly palpable, and everything is absolutely amazing! *U* Rock on!

Really well written, and a nice bit of insight into what is probably (at least somewhat canonically) Sally's life when she's not out adventuring with the other Freedom Fighters.

Great work, and I look forward to other pieces of work from you!

I enjoyed this. I must admit when I first started I thought perhaps it took place during Sonic's year away from Mobius, though I suppose there were hints this was not the case. Perhaps it's only sporting to give Sally a chance to grieve for someone else. So often it seems as if her world revolves around Sonic alone (though I suppose in fairness, it is a comic and television show based of a game called Sonic the Hedgehog).

I've seen Tazi's picture and adored it, and I may have come across Emmy's Loss too. So reading this provided the punch to the gut the pictures given me. This was bittersweet and cute, and it has this uncertain, yet comforting aura about it. Adored Sally and Bunnie in this. It's... wah. You're amazing.

A very touching story. I especially love your imagary. Your metaphors have a warm touch to them that, while inventive, don't deter from the mood of the piece.

I especially like Sally "drawing all the parts of herself together again, like a net dragging shoals of thrashing fish in towards a boat". It's a very active description of Sally trying to pull herself together.

It's nice that you don't make Sally bawl on the floor for drama, keeping Sally in the authoritative role of her character. She breaks, picks herself up and glues herself together. Sally is just like that, and it's nice to see that you understand the range of Sally's character, and the things that she would not do under any circumstances, like pitch and wail. I imagine Sally to be quiet, hiccuping kind of cryer, myself.

Gorgeous.

It's that kind of writing and feeling that so many Sonic fics altogether miss. All the SatAM stories in your gallery are magnificent. Keep up the amazing work!

Always nice to see well-written SatAM fic, and this is a wonderful example as usual.

I loved the metaphor abou "pulling herself back together" beautifully put.

Stressing and wearing herself out, all for the good of those around her.

It's a living, and the errors aren't realized until it's too late to change.