Yet another Tidwell "spooky stuff" story that has pulled me along for the ride. Great work! And thanks for inspiring some of the best sci-fi dreams I've ever dreamt. Couldn't put this story down, even when falling asleep after a long day. I hope you continue to write such creative stuff in the House fandom.

This story made absolutely no sense is that even an ending. who is mort? who is death? this is so d*;'$ creepy but i never really got the story just half read it in pure fusturation! i thought i was a genius but u testd my smarts and i only ended up getting 60% of it. poor me thats a D-. :'(.

SO FUCKING AMAZING! This story was absolutly the best thing that has happened to me in a long time. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much! I cannot convey the graditude and awsome that I am feeling right now!

Creeepy!I love your imagination. Though I was hoping for a better out come for House. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Melissa

oh my god that was so cool!

Um...yeah. But it was very cool. Scary, but cool.

Well written, but I didn't like it. Couldn't stop reading it, but didn't like it.

Hello again, Im glad that you didnt mind my previous comment and I know that I sounded kind of nervous, its just that some authors dont like when they are corrected and take comments like accusations (it has happened to me before).

Anyway, I really liked your story. The way you portreyed House was very nice, I thought that sometimes he was a bit to angsty but well, I guess that has to do more with my taste. I also found some parts very ... creepy, specially the last part, it made me turn around from the computer screen to check if there wasnt anything watching me.

Anyway, I really enjoyed your story and I kept reading until I ended, I was staring so long to the screen that I felt like my eyes would start bleeding anytime! Weird feeling... But I was so tired that I had to rest before reviewing :P

Well, Ill check your others stories, keep writing!

I like your story so far, it seems really interesting. I like the way youve written House. I know that youve already ended this story so Ill wont review again until I end it but I just wanted to point some stuff... maybe somebody else told you this but just in case... theres some mistakes in the spanish in this chapther, and I thougth that it would be best to tell you so you can correct that stuff, it seems to me that it would be a shame to have some small stuff ruin the feeling of the story (it really is constructive criticism, even if you have already ended writing it, there are persons like me that havent still read it)

Ok, Im rambling. This is it:

- "Que usted huelen?" - "¿Qué huele usted?"

- "Hedor putrid" - "Hedor putrido"

- " Y perfume dulce enfermo" - "Y perfume enfermizamente dulce"

Thatll be it. I hope I didntannoy you very much with the rambling and all.

bye :)

Oh, you are an evil, evil writer! ;) Truly though, *incredible* story, your characters were spot-on and the originals were finely crafted things of often terrifying beauty. Your wording and prose was also amazing, surrouding the reader with just the right mix of horror and mystery. Fantastic stuff! Straight out of the very best episodes of the Twilight Zone. :)

Reading your fics I feel just like House - enthralled and scared. Too to afraid to keep going yet too hooked to stop. Creepy...

Gems I must praise:

"And now he wishes he had the squealing back, because the WD40 he fixed it with was given to him by a dead man." Br...

"I remember."

"...and wathcing."

Now I'm going to pretend House is only mental and will recover, just so I can sleep tonight.

Kudos. :-)

That was AWESOME and MESSED UP and I LOVED it!

THANKS:D

Wow! This story blew me away completely. I must say you have an awesome talent for writing stories. It was twisted, imaginative, creepy, and mesmerizing. Really a great and compelling piece of writing.

This is one of the creepiest stories i have ever read...

honestly, it made me uncomfortable and i intially wished i hadn't read it - i hope you can take this as a compliment, becuase it is just THAT twisted...

Wow. This story was so haunting. From the start I was hooked and couldn't leave my computer until I read it all the way through!

Though I wish there was more about House acting strange at the hospital and more interaction with real people. I liked the elements of reality that you had in there with Wilson and such, but I wish there had been more, like when Wilson finds House in the room he rented at the bar. That was so chilling, with House acting completely insane and Wilson terrified of what's happening with his friend. Awesome.

You are an amazing writer. I can always count on you to produce quality stories.

What a ride that was...man-o-man very very nicely done. i said from the beginning i wasn't into this supernat. kinda thing, but boy-o-boy did you turn me round on this...i believe that is due to your awesome writing skills...you got skills babe...Peace