This made me smile

(And that’s surprising cause I always suppress my smile)

Oh, this made me tear up and laugh. Vegeta's family is so sweet to read about. I hope you read over this and fix some mistakes you have but as it is, it's perfect.

That pantsing line might be the funniest scene I've ever imagined.

This was really great - Vegeta really does love his family. I thought this was a very intersesting and heart warming plot. although I did hope that Vegeta and Bulma's marriage was addressed or at least clarified for Trunks.

Love it, love it, very emotional!

Nice story XD

Great story, I really liked it!

ok, totally off topic, but, i wuz listening 2 lights by ellie goulding during this nd, OMG it was PEERFECT! ok, i done now. )

OMG! ths story wuz awesome! all the chappys were great, but ths 1 wuz the best! trunks pantsing vegeta? 2 FUNNY! anyway, ths is 1 of the best 'funny-yet-still-sad-but-great' stories ive evr read.

This story was so GOOD! It was really sweet!

nice story :)

Evil lapizLazuli Knight,

This was a beautiful story! Vegeta is my favorite character because although he has an arrogant nature, we all know he has a heart.

And this fanfic proved just that.

I'm shocked with how wonderful this piece was...it brought tears to my eyes. I congratulate you.

Very well done!

Coofis

aww that's socute... It looks kinda tough making a family scene with Vegetta, because he's...vegetta right? Hahaha I'm not making any sense... Anywho kudos ne!

Sabrina-chan xoxo

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! OMG! L.O.V.E.D the story! I like how it was so dramatic and really made you care about the Briefs family. I never even gave much thought about Bulma and Vegeta not being married. Or about the fact the Trunks is a bastard child. But it really pulled me in! And then I laughed so hard when the pillow fight came up! It was so spontaneous and hilarious and...I absolutely loved the story! Definitely one of the BEST DBZ fanfics I've ever read! Thanks for the epic reading!

Nice. Loved the pillow-fight. XD