tifa hissing saying telling yelling to cloud no biting my double d pillows

Oh! That was great! wonderful! totally in character, you take your time to explore Cloud's an Tifa's thoughts and feelings before getting to the lemon, well done.
Chapter 2? I want the morning after! ;)

tifa to clkoyud yes I got what I always wanted a naked chocobo driving his penis into my pussy hard

This is beautiful! 3

Oh wow this was incredible, the lemon was awesome and the details involved were great.

Guess what, this is posted on MediaMiner and has two chapters. Just google Lady Valtaya and a link will direct you to her media miner page.

Yay Morning after!

I really want to see the next chapter. I hope its as hot as this chapter

*grumble rumble* . Cloud, you lucky son of a -

OMG. I LOVED THIS. That was one of the most best passionate sex scenes I have ever read. Wait, scratch that. THE BEST. This story is so sexy. LOL

It's about dang time they did it. I loved it.(:

Oh wow! Beautiful! Seriously.

The drawn-out angst at Cloud at the beginning and how it moulded into that passionate love making somewhere down the story was done perfectly. The way you wrote the love making was perfect! I say that mainly because, I guess, it was detailed and hot but it wasn't at all vulgar or obscene in any way which I think is a line some authors can accidentally stumble across in the odd sentence or two but you didn't.

Another thing is that it was nice to have Tifa be more forward for a change and in a way that seems quite true to her character - strong and a little bold but sensitive and definitely not hysterical or over dramatic.

I'd also like to say this story struck a chord in me pretty early on in the story when Tifa realises that most of Edge knows that she loves Cloud but also 'know' that he doesn't love her back. That broke my heart a little which only served to make the way he eventually gave in to his feelings all the more sweeter. I was rooting for it!

... Oh man. I just really liked this. Thank you for sharing with us!

It's time I told you how much I've enjoyed this sexy story each time I've read it. And I read it slowly, and carefully, fully enjoying every little shudder and electrical impulse that surely shoots out from their love making...it's a lovely lemon and I thank you for it. And Yes, I agree, a morning after story seems in order-what do Marlene and Denzel think? I'm sure they approve and will be relieved that Cloud and Tifa finally have realized what has been obvious to everyone else-that they belong together all the way! mc

please put in the morning after! cuz i really wanna know how Denzel, Marlene, and Yuffie will react! haha! i know Yuffie's not there, but she's Yuffie she probably knew what happened right before it happened! haha! :D so please update! :D

luve,

Fairy!

Very tasteful rendition of my favorite couple. I know its been a while but I still do hope you continue this fic. Its very well written with just the write amount of FFVII story, sappy love and amusing passion. Keep it up!