This is a really good story!Too bad the new movie had luke lose faith :-(

Very poignant, interesting to see things from Dooku's point of view. I love the second to last paragraph.

"We were heroes of the galaxy. We were cunning warriors and negotiators without peer. In the end, it was a naïve farm boy from Tatooine who was the wisest."

What a fantastic line, what an amazing one-shot! Thanks for writing this.

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So well done. Artistic and touching.

This is amazing. It's just... gah. Brilliantly done - I love the fact that you've picked Dooku to narrate this piece and it totally works. Just fantastic.

Oh my gosh, what an excellent piece. I'm shocked I never read this before. Dooku's POV was a nice interesting twist on the character story. The description of Obi Wan and Anakin's bond was just beautiful and of course who doesn't love Qui Gon and his awesomeness! The mention of Luke was absolutely brilliant as well. I loved it! :D

beautifully written! i love your portrayal of everyone losing hope in Anakin except Luke. :)

masterfully done.

The Jedi work together but they don't completely trust each other.

Wonderful writing!

2 thumbs up!

Wow. That's really insightful. Me likey! :D

I have to say this is one of the greatest pieces that I have ever read. It was amazing. I loved the moments between each of them and especially loved the ending about Luke. It was brillant and so true.

Wow, brilliantly done. I loved all of it...the flashbacks, insight into each of the characters, etc. ) Nice job, this is going to my faves!

Dana

That was a very thought-provoking story. I'm glad I read it, and the ending made me feel funny...sort of like I wanted to cry, but not. But it's still a lovely story :)